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vikingprincess May 23 2010, 20:24:55 UTC
See, now I wonder what or who it was, and how it got to be the way it became, and if it really did get any peace at all....

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ficwriter1966 May 23 2010, 20:49:28 UTC
I think I'll let you write that one. :)

Thanks for commenting!

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vikingprincess May 23 2010, 21:10:13 UTC
Hee, I'll add it to the huge pile of SpN plot bunnies that I have had brewing for years... and never written....

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tifaching May 23 2010, 20:25:13 UTC
"A little stone grapefruit with nubby arms and legs, maybe." Exactly! Only really, really creepy.

"His life, man." I loved the way this theme ran through the chapters. Because Dean's life? Just the sort of place where an ungrabbable monster would threaten one pregnant and one crazy innocent in an elevator. And I loved the idea of the woman giving birth to a "little(ish)" person. Hee!

This: "He heard Sam's voice a couple minutes ago. That'll have to do." and this: "Yeah, Sam, he thinks. You pretty much saved me for this." So Dean.

Great story as always! Thanks for sharing!

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ficwriter1966 May 23 2010, 20:49:52 UTC
You're very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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borgmama1of5 May 23 2010, 20:31:06 UTC
Very intense story.

I say this every time, but I find your Dean voice to be spot-on perfect. His internal monolog? Priceless!

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ficwriter1966 May 23 2010, 20:50:07 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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feliciakw May 23 2010, 21:31:50 UTC
Case stories FTW! I thinks that's all I'm going to read between now and September. Or mostly. So if you have any more case stories up your sleeve, have at.

Oh, I also bought the new tie-in novel at your recommendation. Looking forward to reading.

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ficwriter1966 May 24 2010, 00:13:12 UTC
Awesome! I always worry about these final chapters - whether they're satisfying or not. I lean so heavily toward character work that sometimes I feel like I neglect some of the notes that a more plot-oriented person would be sure to hit. So it's nice to hear that a story works out well.

I've got a longer case fic in mind for whenever I can wrangle a week off work. Right now it's looking like late July. Stay tuned!

Let me know what you think of the tie-in!

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irismay42 May 23 2010, 22:00:40 UTC
See, even when they just hunted wendigoes Sam and Dean's life wasn't straightforward - Dean had to go and mind meld with the thing!

That was like a breath of fresh air, it really was! Thanks for writing something that didn't angst us to death! (But had just enough angst in there to keep us happy!)

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ficwriter1966 May 24 2010, 00:14:58 UTC
You know I had to put a *little* bit of angst in there! It wouldn't be Winchesters if there were no angst. :)

Glad you enjoyed it - it was a fun little piece to tackle over the weekend.

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