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ficwriter1966

SPN FIC - Two By Two (Part 5 of 5)

Jan 03, 2010 16:05

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The premise: After a long, disheartening couple of days on the road, Dean went to bed in a motel.
That's not where he woke up.

"Hello?" he called. "Anybody?"
His voice echoed a little, but only a little. The sound of it was enough to make him shudder, and that was just plain wrong. Him, badass Dean Winchester, scared ( Read more... )

multi-chap, dean, season 5, two by two

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just_ruth January 3 2010, 21:30:45 UTC

Wow. Like the final episode of MASH when Hawkeye retreated into a fantasy so he wouldn't have to face the accidental smothering of a baby.

Demons fight dirty.

Well done, well done! Thank you!

ficwriter1966 January 4 2010, 00:20:09 UTC

That was definitely an inspiration (MASH being one of my early fandoms).

Glad you enjoyed it - it was a nice way to spend an unreasonably cold weekend!

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ficwriter1966 January 4 2010, 00:24:26 UTC

I packed it full of lots of little bits and pieces! Some deliberate, some accidental (but still interesting, I think).

I'm glad you enjoyed it - I've never tried anything like this before, and it was fun to tinker with.

Thanks for commenting!

Two by Two ewanmax January 3 2010, 21:55:21 UTC

Read the whole thing down in one gulp, wild trip in every way, loved the dog and all the conversations and the diner and oh how I hate that Dean always takes it all on himself and thank you for helping him find his way home.

Really sad and wonderful!

Re: Two by Two ficwriter1966 January 4 2010, 00:26:14 UTC

Thank you! I really had fun putting this together, so I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. (And I have to admit, that icon always makes me grin.)

faithintheboys January 3 2010, 22:14:17 UTC

Wow. Dean's mind was using the dream world as a safe haven of sorts. Poor Dean. That was awesome. Thanks for this! It was a treat.

ficwriter1966 January 4 2010, 00:27:06 UTC

You're welcome! I'm finding that I love these vacation-time fics. Each one different, but the structure of it really seems to work for me. Which means...more to come!

irismay42 January 3 2010, 22:34:13 UTC

Of all the things Dean's done, the one thing I don't think he'd ever be able to come to terms with would be causing the death of a child ( ... )

ficwriter1966 January 4 2010, 00:29:58 UTC

I suspect Mary may have had run-ins with the same people/things we all do - that that probably got her dander up. But Dean, as a little guy, would know Mommy as loving and nurturing. So it probably came as twice the surprise to him to discover that teen!Mary was a tough little cookie. I think if she'd lived, and had joined the rest of her family at hunting, she would have made Ellen look like a wussy.

I'm glad you enjoyed it - I really love doing these vacation fics, and as long as I can keep finding subject matter, I'll keep doing them!