HERE WITHIN MY HEART 2/2 (the bad romance series)

Jan 17, 2011 16:48


HERE WITHIN MY HEART 2/2
Beta: gwencarmichael  <3333

A/N Ok, couldn't help myself.  Here's the next chapter!   Love you!

Chapter 2 )

the world devoured, adommy, the bad romance, here within my heart

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funsize93 January 18 2011, 04:12:18 UTC
Wow thanks for updating so quickly! I really love this, probably because I can relate to some of the things Adam is going through-being in high school and not having any friends-but seeing how Tommy and his friends just embrace Adam gives me hope that the same will happen for me. By the way...its a little out of my comfort zone to comment on some fics i read but with ones like this i just had to! Thanks again can't wait for more!

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fictionfreak15 January 18 2011, 04:51:26 UTC
Hello again!!! Oh please please please comment! I'm a comment junkie so don't be shy.
Aww sweetie *hugs* Adam's insecurities in this fic are largely autobiographical - but mainly from the first part of this series that came before THE WORLD DEVOURED. It was based on some ideas from the Lady Gaga song, and I just always loved the idea of the perfect friend or lover in a story coming out of no where to save (you, me, Adam, whoever) from a world of greyness where no one likes you. I've been enjoying the openess and understanding that I been getting after my friends read this - because the people I meet on LJ are like Tommy's crew for me. When I get all self conscious or if something bad happens, you guys make it all better. <333

Love and Respect - Caris.

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i_glitterz January 18 2011, 09:00:43 UTC
I love this on going story..you are an amazing writer and have so much potential...this is one of my favorite fics...keep up on the posting please can't wait for the next sequel :)

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fictionfreak15 January 18 2011, 22:35:21 UTC
Hello!!! Thank you for reading this!! It's wonderful that it's caught so much attention because I really worked hard and worried so much over it, but your comment makes it worth all the effort. I'm so glad you like it, bb! :):):):)
I'll post again very soon. I'll see you then! <33

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i_glitterz January 20 2011, 05:48:53 UTC
no need to worry bb :) your very amazing and inspiring...i have a few Adommy fics im working on and when i get my new laptop i will post them...im a little nervous but i hope everyone likes them...i have added you i hope you add back :D

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fictionfreak15 January 20 2011, 21:49:36 UTC
You got it ;) Always lookin' forward to Adommy. You'll be great, hon! Good luck!

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fictionfreak15 January 19 2011, 02:34:07 UTC
:D Yes, Kris is so wise ;) *snickers* The things Adam hears from the crew make up a big part of why I cherish this story. So you can see more why it might have shattered me before when we first met. There was definitely a short time when I told myself I was never going to post again, but I may as well stop breating. "The Bad Romance" could have stood alone, I suppose, but I would always have known that I'd left whole story untold.

Thank you again for your continued support, glowing complements that make me blush, and for being so beautiful. (You're not a stranger, but I'm telling you that, so all I feel is LOVE...LOVE. *offkey singing* LOL.) Sorry, good comments make me silly sometimes.

I love you, Donna. Take you're time. I know you got a lot to do and you're stronger than me for ripping yourself away from LJ to do it. I'm such a procrastinater.(sp) 5 HOURS! That's how every weekend has been for me since I got my own lap top! LOL.

Will post again soon, bb! See you when I see you! <333333

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adommylove2010 January 19 2011, 03:28:53 UTC
wow..i loved this fic so far...i teared up a few times. with all the gay hate and bullying going on around us so frequently, it just hit me hard. im sure this is actually happening somewhere in the world and its sad. ..i hope this fic has a happy ending, cuz im almost outta tissues :'(

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fictionfreak15 January 19 2011, 04:03:44 UTC
Thank you so much for coming this far! I hate sad endings, so you have my word this ending is as happy as the fic will allow. I think everyone will be happy with it.

You're probably right :( but if that's true, then I pray the same outcome will go to whoever may be in pain from such things.

LOL, I've never had so many people tell me they're short on tissues! I will definitely issue warnings for the next part :)
Thank you again for the time you've put into reading this story. It's made the work my beta and I put in all worth it! <33333

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adommylove2010 January 19 2011, 14:15:08 UTC
yes, you definitely need to issue a tissue warning...lol thanks for such a great story ...way beyond what i usually read, but beautifully written and i will wait patiently for that happy ending for the boys. thanks for your wonderful fics and keeping me entertained.

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caroline_cuna January 19 2011, 12:35:11 UTC
Your story reminded me of how we all have our own pains inside, so we need to be nice to one another. I like the different emotions your stories evoke in me. I was supposed to be mean to this person tomorrow because of what he did, but ooops, I thought I'd better be nice. Thanks to you, I saved myself from becoming a total ass. LOL. Love you, Caris.

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fictionfreak15 January 20 2011, 00:02:08 UTC
Wow!!! That's so Glam! I'm proud of you, cuz I know how hard it is to be nice to someone when you don't wanna be, and making an ass out of myself is one of my worst fears. Adam would be proud of you!!! :):):):)

I love you too, Caroline. I'm glad you got something out of this. *glomps*

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