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THE BAD ROMANCE 2/2

Dec 23, 2010 08:48

TITLE: The Bad Romance
AUTHOR: fictionfreak15
SERIES: The Bad Romance
WARNINGS: language, bullying, homophobic insults, sex, tears, MAJOR FUCKING DRAMA
PAIRING: Adam/Tommy
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Adam, Tommy or Neil. This did not happen, in fact - from what I hear - it's almost the exact opposite.

SUMMARY: Adam is 21, and it's the night he loses his ( Read more... )

adommy, the bad romance

Comments 26

wizardesslyn December 23 2010, 19:15:33 UTC

Wow...what a cool 'verse...
looking forward to the next part...
really like this perspective!

fictionfreak15 December 23 2010, 19:50:02 UTC

Thanks! I've been looking forward to posting this. But it's hard to decide what I wanna work on next, you know?
I'm so glad you read it! Just a warning tho, next part is dark, but it'll be ok in the end. *hugs*

wizardesslyn December 23 2010, 20:31:29 UTC

That's okay bb...
flowers don't grow without rain :)

sparklesdani December 23 2010, 19:46:40 UTC

*sniffle* I cried for Adam this whole fic, baby. It was so emotional and heart-wrenching and I really hope somebody beats the pulp out of those guys. :)

And I love your Tommy. Seriously, I want to marry him. XD He's just such a fucking awesome dude. :D

I love this 'verse and I can't wait for more. <3333333 Love ya, sweetie! Hugs, dani <3333

fictionfreak15 December 23 2010, 19:57:58 UTC

Hey sweetie, thanks for reading!

Some of this is was like therapy for me, writing out my feelings about school and peers and feeling like I'm not good enough. Now, because of friends like you, I can honestly say to the world, "fuck you, I'm loved."

An interesting note about this Tommy. When I first wrote this, I'd just finished another story (that I don't plan on posting) where he was like a weepy baby the whole way. I really felt the need to give Tommy his balls back. I think I succeeded.

I hope to post more very soon, bb. Thanks for being here! *hugs*

robin1961 December 24 2010, 00:02:02 UTC

the emotion of this piece was just wonderful !! just love this so much .... but again I love all you write. I think the journey Adam and Tommy are about to take will be wonderful to read, can't wait for more.

fictionfreak15 December 24 2010, 00:12:21 UTC

I'm so glad I know you, Robin. You never fail to give me my comment fix. THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH for reading, baby. *glomps*

Be prepared tho, there's trouble ahead that changes everything...but it only makes Adommy's love stronger. Cheesey, I know, but I'm a sucker for that stuff. ;)

So yeah, very dark stuff ahead but if you get through it, I hope you'll like it. Thank you again for the beautiful compliment. *melting* Hope to post more very soon. <3333333333

jonne_bunny December 24 2010, 00:34:48 UTC

I love this so much its hard to put into words.
"But now that you are a freak, you gotta realize that it's not a bad thing."
"If you're worth something to one person then you are worth ALL the world."
I could quote so much from this story. You did an amazing job. Thank you so much for sharing this. Looking forward to the next part.

fictionfreak15 December 24 2010, 00:44:17 UTC

*bouncing up and down* :D Thank you!!!!

I could cry you're so sweet, hon!
I'm so glad you liked it <3
Thank you so much for reading it! :):):)

There's dark turns ahead tho. Hope to post more very soon!

cunningdeb December 24 2010, 04:11:58 UTC

Wow, just wow. A lot of what Tommy said hits home with me. I'm not gay but I've dealt with being put down and bullied and I sympathize. It's better now but when I was in school, I also had the same fantasies Adam had about having the perfect comeback and doing something to defend myself but it always came as an afterthought. Thankfully, I was never physically bullied but emotional is just as bad if not worse ~ you don't see the marks and they seem to stick around longer. That's a big part of why Adam means so much to me. I sometimes wish I could go back and say 'fuck you' but I've moved on, and my self confidence has gotten stronger to some extent. As Adam has said, 'it does get better'.

Sorry for going all Dr. Phil. Great story, looking forward to the next part

Hugs
Deb <333

fictionfreak15 December 26 2010, 02:19:40 UTC

Hi again. This was my attempt to tell a story that the song inspired me to tell, and I ended up putting a bunch of my own personal bullshit into it when I wrote it.

Knowing that you have felt the same way makes me feel both like I'm not alone and also very very angry that anyone would treat someone as wonderful as you that way. I've moved on from some of it like you have, cuz you have to sometimes. Yes it does get better, with some set backs, but I have all of my friends, so I am happy :)

I love everything you say, Deb. Thank you. *hugs warmly*