Original Poem & Fiction

[fictionalsquee]

Both of these are untitled.

This is a poem that I kind of deliriously wrote in the middle of the night a few years ago. I've been sitting on it until now, because I'm not the poetry type and it kind of weirded me out, but I think it's time.

Comments

[barkinmad]

So good. I'm going to use the cliche of watching a car crash? Like, you know he shouldn't be doing it, and he knows he shouldn't be doing it, but he's doing it anyway because Lucy is a cruel bitch. And the ending of the poem just kind of left me sitting there for a moment. I totally wasn't expecting it. SO GOOD.

P.S. LOL incest.

[squeegee_burble]

Aw, baby I'm so glad you liked it! Sorry I wasn't online the other night, I wandered away from my computer. Raincheck?

[barkinmad]

Definitely, but you shouldn't have left me hanging like that! (I'm aware I was being stalkerish and whiny though, I just miss you!)