Comments | fictionalsquee: GIFTED PILOT, PART FOUR!!!

fictionalsquee

GIFTED PILOT, PART FOUR!!!

Mar 30, 2008 16:39

So I wound up tacking an extra scene on to the end of the last scene. So, instead of fading out, it goes like this:

( I'm starting from a few lines into the last scene, do not be alarmed. )

gifted

Comments 4

lunaste March 31 2008, 16:05:40 UTC

I love this <3 Took me a while to tell the characters apart, but I always have that problem.
You're just hilarious <3

fictionalsquee March 31 2008, 17:52:18 UTC

Aw, thank you!

lesmisloony March 31 2008, 21:16:17 UTC

I lovvve it. You are an extremely talented... uh... TV... writer? Thing.
*nods*

momar_mole April 3 2008, 06:28:58 UTC

This is real good, burble. I like how you've extended the lunch scene. I know I toldja already, but it makes everything a lot more clear to me. I have a better sense of the difference between Joanie and Cora, which is something that was confusing me, before. And I like how you've introduced the guys a little more. It really gives a sense of the whole clique dynamic. Win.

I like the home scene, too. I must say, I am really looking forward to the dinner bits. Oh, and cleaning products?!

LOLOLOL

ILU, BURBLEZ!