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Vindication and Desperation [Bakura Ryou x Yami no Bakura]

Mar 15, 2006 23:32

Title: Vindication and Desperation
Author: hales731
Fandom: Yuugiou
Pairing: Bakura Ryou x Yami no Bakura (That's right... Ryou's on top for once!)
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, Drama, Smut. :|
Theme for 30_kisses: 8 :||: Our Own World FINAL THEME!!
Summary: Maybe, just maybe, a world of their own would be something of worth.

( Yami no Bakura rarely pondered things other than his plan of revenge. Nothing and nobody matter to him unless they could bring him what he sought. Or so he had believed. )

mature, angst, general, tendershipping

Comments 2

xinda March 16 2006, 08:49:28 UTC

OMFG. Okay. I was in a horridly depressed mood and this just lifted me right up. There was so much that I agreed with and that's one reason I enjoy reading your Tendershipping fics. While I like that there are so many ways to take this pairing, and you manage to do that, I really like the view that they have to one another are similar to much of how I figure they would be. Even if it slightly differs, it's nice to see it play out so nicely and, to me, pretty dang close (if not exactly) how I imagine.

I really liked Ryou coming foward like that and the flashback type of Battle City/Ship and that sort of explanation and thought(s) that Bakura had with Ryou on the ground. Also with Ryou mentioning the nightmares and confronting Bakura to his face.

He comes foward when really necessary (I think) and this was a good example.

He had never been given the opportunity to experience pleasures of the flesh when he had had his own body, back in his time. He had neither the time nor the desire.So very much agreed ( ... )

ophelias_guard December 29 2006, 15:26:40 UTC

Excellent! The way you portray Yami Bakura is incredible. The nightmare thing gave the story an amazingly sharp edge.