Ok, so I've seen this on a couple of entries on my flist and thought, what the hell. I shall inflict my amateur writing on whatever public is out there. So here we go!
I really like the style of using short sentences- it captures the characters and their rough edges so well. And the Zoe/Wash ones are especially interesting, because I hadn't thought of Zoe's anger, really, at losing Wash, and that's exactly how she would feel. Great job!
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