BioRhythm | PG-13 | PATD gen | by maple_mahogany

Jan 02, 2009 10:50

Title: BioRhythm
Pairing: Panic at the Disco - Spencer Smith gen
Word Count: 2,890
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I really do know the difference between real life and fiction. This is the latter.
A/N and Summary:Tremendous beta thanks to queenb23more, redandglenda and to mrsquizzical for making me. It's always her fault ( Read more... )

spencer smith, bandom, genre: gen, patd

Leave a comment

Comments 43

penceyprepster January 2 2009, 19:33:01 UTC
Awww! Just awww! I want to hug him so hard. I want to hug you too because this was just perfect.

The banter between them was great. I like Northern Downpour as an up-tempo ragtime number. and Oh, my god, fuck you all. If any white guys could be the Beastie Boys, it would not be you three. Heehee!

I think this sums up Spencer Smith in a nutshell: He hopes the girl at the end of the table is crying because Brendon smiled at her and not because Spencer didn't. Oh, Spencer.

Of course, my absolute favorite part was Spencer calling his Mommy and her being so wise and knowing. I like thinking that she still knows him best and that at the end of the day, "rock star" or not, he will always need his Mom :)

You did a great job with this, I loved it a lot and didn't even mind the lack of slash *twirls you*

Reply


mrsquizzical January 2 2009, 21:35:37 UTC
even rock stars need their mums, right?

*loves you so hard*

Reply

fics_by_maple January 2 2009, 21:57:26 UTC
They do, they do!

*hugs* Thank you!

Reply


redsnake05 January 2 2009, 21:52:13 UTC
I love the way Spencer's rhythm is like a real thing to him, something that he can feel and move in synch with, the way a sailor moves with the ship. Gorgeous.

Reply

fics_by_maple January 2 2009, 21:58:32 UTC
I appreciate that - thank you! It was such a short piece, I thought a 'device' might help it along.

Thank you so much for commenting!

Reply


moon_1988 January 3 2009, 02:37:12 UTC
I liked this very, very much! The way you capture their relationship, it feels like they are really a band, a team. Everytime i think of them for real, i imagine them this way, you made me very, very happy putting that into words in a fantastic way. The Rhythim thing was awesome, very creative.
And for some reason i'm still smiling at Brendon for the b's instead of m's. Really cool! :)

Reply

fics_by_maple January 3 2009, 03:21:51 UTC
Oh! *cuddles this comment* What a great thing to hear. I am so happy that it worked for you. Thanks for letting me know!

Reply


tjs_whatnot January 3 2009, 03:36:55 UTC
Wow!

Now I can say I've officially read "Bandslash!" Even if their is no actual slash in this bandslash--or maybe becaause. I really enjoyed this!

The problem of the Rhythm still being there in the end, the way it was absolved and forgiven, but not melodramatic was very good. I liked too that even though they're there for him, in the end, it will be himself that has to fix it--not even his mom gets him out of that boat!

Loved the mom too! Oh, if we all had moms like that!

Good job!

Reply

fics_by_maple January 3 2009, 19:21:56 UTC
Wow - hi! Thank you for reading. Yep - non-slash-bandslash this time around.

I'm very bouncy that you felt that way about solution and responsibility involved. You're right, I think his mom would expect him to take care of his own business, too.

Thank you so much for reading!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up