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FIC--Getting It Right, H/G

Nov 19, 2007 22:46

Title: Getting It Right
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Harry/Ginny
Words: 2514
Summary: He's trying, really.
Author Note: hpiknut gave me a prompt for a fluffy first time fic, because she's a sucker for it. I hope this meets with your approval. It's not really all that smutty because Harry was feeling a bit shy.

( ...when it was time for the main event, he thought things would be perfect. )

nc17 gift, harry

Comments 23

laurel_potter November 20 2007, 06:32:47 UTC

Um, yeah... I'd say that close to NC-17.

I like it a lot. Very good descriptions of a couple getting to know each other.

And I found a small typo:

"Lovc you, too.

fics_by_aj November 20 2007, 14:23:38 UTC

thanks for pointing that out...

and yes, it can be very hard to figure out what to do to the other...

personally, the "owowowow" had me in stitches

lunalovepotter November 20 2007, 06:50:51 UTC

Ooh, definitely pushing the boundaries of NC-17. But that only makes me like it more! :D

fics_by_aj November 20 2007, 14:23:58 UTC

haha! figures....

katydid713 November 20 2007, 11:09:21 UTC

Very close to NC-17, but very, very good. It also rang very true and brought back memories. :-)

fics_by_aj November 20 2007, 14:24:18 UTC

I hope they were good memories....

alejandrasilva November 20 2007, 11:24:31 UTC

really cute, and hot of course, im really happy to have another HG from you again, it been a long time..

fics_by_aj November 20 2007, 14:24:53 UTC

yes it has been a while since harry and ginny stopped by..always glad to see you...

girlspell November 20 2007, 12:16:18 UTC

Wll more then R, but the hey. Very well written.

fics_by_aj November 20 2007, 14:25:29 UTC

thanks....and yeah, after I thought about it, it's nc17...