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Number Thirteen - Whimsy/ Reality

Comments

[beadattitude]

Oh, that's really very lovely, that is. ::nod nod nod::

Of course Fraser has wings.

[keerawa]

I like Ray's parenthetical thought processes very, very much. But you TEASED me with the thought of the jerk-off session. Ray picking up the feather is very Ray-like, falling just on the sweet side of the stalker line.

[zabira]

i just loved everything about this AND its counterpart!

the two bits that stood out the most for me are the paragraph where ray is cataloging what MIGHT have fallen on the floor if it were someone else (lime green, hee!) and the last bit where he's cataloging what's beautiful about fraser's wings. awww.

&hearts

[0not_just_me0]

So much *JOY* packed into such a small package! Ray's voice was excellent And the lime green dildo just about killed me. And "I thought you said Dief was deaf" made me laugh so loud I startled my kid.

And then -- WINGS!! I just love wings... poor itchy Fraser. And Ray sneaked a feather! **loves**

[luzula]

Oh yum. I liked this, and also the counterpart.

I like how Ray just accepts it, and Fraser's pleased surprise when he does.

[ficlateer]

:) thank you!