Pen to Paper

Jan 22, 2010 00:55

Title: Pen to Paper
Author/Artist: Fickledeuce
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Lithuania/Poland
Rating: PG
Warnings: Unfinished fluff?
Summary: Growing up is hard to do, and Lithuania finds a way of recording his feelings.

It started with a gift. Looking back, nobody would be able to even say who it was from, no doubt ( Read more... )

unfinished, lithuania, fanfiction, poland

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<3 fickledeuce January 21 2010, 20:26:19 UTC
Thank you very much!I've always had a soft spot for these two as kiddies, so I'm glad you like it~ * humble bow*

Yes, I hope to finish it in maybe about a weeks time, if all goes well. I shouldn't really have posted this half finished, but I just wanted to see the general reaction to what I had~

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jyuufish January 22 2010, 00:40:20 UTC
Oh dear, I loved this fic and I loved the very thoughtful tone that you've portrayed Liet with. It was wonderful and I enjoyed reading it. I also hope that you write more and I'll definitely read it if you do!

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tamerlorika January 22 2010, 00:49:55 UTC
I'm really really happy with the way this is going. Not only is your Liet spot-on , with his awkwardness and shyness - but it also nice you made him a little less of whiner (do I make sense?). But its also nice, because I remember similar feelings (not that my voice changed or anything ^^) from puberty; what I mean is its a really nice 'growing up' story and I really look forward to continuation.

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fanofstuff666 January 22 2010, 06:06:25 UTC
Aww, this is adorable...

I can see how the diary fits Liet, though, personality-wise, as opposed to Feliks' personality. And I'd love to see more of this. ^.^

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tiger_azul January 30 2010, 21:12:48 UTC
As a fellow stationery junkie, I completely understood how Lithuania felt when he was presented with a journal of his very own! And I knew his pain when Poland swiped the pretty one for himself (which was a really nice touch, btw!) :D

I really like how you’re developing the relationship between Lithuania and Poland, and your characterisation of Liet is great - you really captured his angsty teen surliness!

I hope you continue, this is a really promising start ♥

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