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Harry Potter | Ginny/Luna | Lost

Jul 24, 2008 02:32

Fandom: Harry Potter
Title: Lost
Characters: Neville Longbottom, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Pairings: Ginny/Luna, but it's really sort of Luna/Ginny/Neville because it's my OT3 and I can't help but sneak in some Neville/Ginny whenever possible.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 690
Summary: Ginny realizes that Luna has disappeared. Set during DH.
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femmeslash/yuri, character: ginny weasley, character: luna lovegood, fandom: harry potter, character: neville longbottom, pairing: ginny/luna, rating: pg, !heron_advocate

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heron_advocate July 24 2008, 17:28:57 UTC

♥ Mmm, I should. 'Cause they were made for each other.

elphie_7 July 24 2008, 17:24:28 UTC

Aww, poor Ginny D:

I love how well you characterize her. I'm not a huge Ginny fan since she seemed more like an accessory to Harry in the series, but you bring Ginny to life much more for me. Great job!

heron_advocate July 24 2008, 17:30:10 UTC

Thank you very much, that's a huge compliment. :) I'm really glad you liked it.

meggygurl July 25 2008, 02:06:24 UTC

Awww! Poor Ginny. I always wished I could have seen more of what was going on at Hogwarts. I would have LOVED some Ginny/Luna/Neville action. I guess that is what fic is for!

Keep writing, it's lovely. :D

heron_advocate July 25 2008, 02:13:27 UTC

Ha, I'm exactly the same way. During most of the Trio stuff, I was like, "Bo-ring! Let's hear about Hogwarts!" but then, I am horribly biased. I may do a sequel in which Ginny and Luna (and maybe Neville) are reunited, but I'll have to go back and see what actually happened in DH to pull that one off, hah. Because I can't quite remember.

poetic_pixie_13 July 25 2008, 04:32:54 UTC

Awww. I love Neville, and Ginny, and Luna..

♥♥

heron_advocate July 25 2008, 04:37:34 UTC

Me too. They should've ended up together. *sadfais*

whimseywisp July 25 2008, 04:35:18 UTC

That was so spot on! It's such a beautiful snippet from a bit of DH we never got to see.

I love your writing style - I could feel the tension building and building. And for a ficlet, that's pretty impressive.

Also, I didn't even notice where you used resolve twice, and I'm kind of psychotic about things like that.

heron_advocate July 25 2008, 04:39:17 UTC

Thank you so very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) And I think I tend to notice things like that more when I'm writing it and less when someone else is writing it. It's not like they're even in the same paragraph - or heck, even in the same half of the fic - but it drives me bonkers. xD Thank you for commenting!