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Samurai Champloo | Mugen/Fuu | Why

Feb 12, 2010 01:58

Fandom: Samurai Champloo
Title: Why
Characters: Fuu, Mugen
Pairings: Mugen/Fuu
Rating: R for language
Word Count: 309
Summary: "Why'd you have to be so stupid?"
Notes/Warnings: It's kinda depressing. Which for some reason it always is when I write Mugen/Fuu.

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rating: r, pairing: mugen/fuu, character: kasumi fuu, het, character: mugen, fandom: samurai champloo, !heron_advocate

Comments 10

dauting February 12 2010, 08:02:06 UTC

Of course Jin comes in and saves the day ... or comes in a moment too late. Really, I don't care; I enjoyed this fic regardless.

Declarations of love have a tendency of making fics cheesy as far as I'm concerned, but there ARE times when the delivery is just perfect. This is one of those times.

Thanks for writing this, even more so for sharing.

heron_advocate February 13 2010, 01:03:43 UTC

Thanks for your kind words. :)

furousha February 12 2010, 15:26:35 UTC

oh i love this. the way the love declaration is presented is perfect, not cheesy at all. :)

heron_advocate February 13 2010, 01:04:01 UTC

Thank you.

writerx75 February 13 2010, 05:03:08 UTC

I think the thing I like most about this piece is that it's very them...for all three characters in this series, it seems like it's mostly by what they do that you can tell what's going on with them...they will usually eventually say something about what's on their minds, but it often almost seems like an afterthought by the time it's said, like you were supposed to have figured it out long before...like Fuu's declaration here. Very nicely done all around. :D

heron_advocate February 13 2010, 14:41:55 UTC

Thanks a lot!

lil_missb February 15 2010, 03:15:09 UTC

heron_advocate February 15 2010, 03:16:08 UTC

Thanks for commenting. :D

champloolover July 2 2010, 19:27:52 UTC

You really emulate the characters.
I loved it.

heron_advocate July 5 2010, 02:07:16 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad.