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Start to Finish: Chapter 6: Garcia

Mar 14, 2011 08:34

Title: Start to Finish
Author: ficdirectory
Characters: Garcia
Word Count: 23,799 - Chapter 6/10
Warnings/Spoilers/Rating: Loss of a Loved One, Violence/Seasons 1-6/FRT.
Summary: Garcia’s time in the BAU.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the CBS-owned characters mentioned. Not written for profit.
Notes: Over the last week, I have written a crazy amount of ( Read more... )

warning: violence, garcia, author: ficdirectory, criminal minds, warning: loss of a loved one, rating: pg-13, title: start to finish, words: 10000-29999

Comments 10

nannerz2cool March 14 2011, 14:01:48 UTC

Your Garcia is so presh. I love her, and my absolute favorite is the Peeps-only-access to the Lord of the Rings Festapalooza. :) So amazing.

ficdirectory March 14 2011, 16:56:52 UTC

Aw, yay! Thanks so much! I love the LotR Festapalooza, too! <3

yaba324 March 14 2011, 23:15:18 UTC

Garcia is like a huge burst of color during a drab, rainy day and I think you pick up on her complexities extremely well in this chapter. I like that she has demons too but prefers to fight them with love and enthusiasm rather than something far more sinister. I feel like she's stronger for it and you touch on all the best Garcia moments on the show including the infamous and accidental pass at Strauss. Probably my favorite Garcia moment ever :). Kudos to you for writing it in ;)

Yana

ficdirectory March 14 2011, 23:59:02 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! That is exactly what I love about Garcia, too. <3 She is so amazing and such a bright spot in the seriousness. I forgot I included the Strauss scene, but that one is pretty great! Glad you enjoyed. There was technically one more drabble for Garcia, but it ended up being like 700 words, so I gave it its own entry. It's here if you'd like to see it. http://ficdirectory.livejournal.com/94605.html#cutid1

mcgarrygirl78 March 15 2011, 22:59:14 UTC

OMG, I love this. When Rossi asked 'what the hell is a Peep?' I literally burst into laughter. I love the way you write Penelope, so fresh so real....so Garcia. The end was sad though, dont let her kill Kevin, I love the two of them together. You nailed down her BAU life and I really, really love this. It's going in my memories : )

ficdirectory March 16 2011, 00:08:54 UTC

LOL! That made me laugh to know Rossi made you laugh! Thanks so much. Feel free to click on the "garcia" tag if you're interested in more of her. And that is so fabulous! I think it's the first time something of mine has made it into someone's memories <3 PS There was supposed to be another drabble with these others, but it grew too large, and needed its own home: http://ficdirectory.livejournal.com/94605.html#cutid1 <-- It's here if you're intersted! Thank you so much for your sweet comments! I really appreciate them!

szarabasjka March 20 2011, 02:28:35 UTC

damn... so good, she's not my fav and I like your version very much too, secretly I hope she finally hooks up with Morgan...

I can believe that what Happened ot Hotch marked the whole team. Like a lost on the family.
here we have this little bit of the mother-like JJ, always worried for them all, so sweet.

ficdirectory March 20 2011, 11:16:46 UTC

LOL! Aw, that's sweet.

And I do think that what happened to Hotch marked the whole team just as what happened to Emily will undoubtedly mark the whole team (don't know if you watched that far so I will keep it vague...) It is a loss that the entire family feels, like you said.

And I do love JJ, so I put her wherever I can! :)

szarabasjka March 21 2011, 20:02:53 UTC

Yeah I know what happened, and I wonder how could they solve things out after the way MOrgan acted towards her... a fake death is gonna be a major trust issue if Paget stays...

I love JJ too.

ficdirectory March 21 2011, 22:48:17 UTC

Ooh. So true.