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Alaska: Chapter 4

Mar 23, 2011 14:55

Title: Alaska
Author: ficdirectory
Characters: Emily, Team
Word Count: 10K - Chapter 4/7
Warnings/Spoilers/Rating: Disaster/Episode 5x21, "Exit Wounds"/FRT.
Summary/Prompt: The floatplane crashes on the way back from Alaska.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the CBS-owned characters mentioned. Not written for profit.
Notes: Written for nannerz2cool for her donation to ontd_ai's ( Read more... )

prentiss, reid, warning: disaster, garcia, author: ficdirectory, jj, rossi, title: alaska, morgan, criminal minds, hotch, rating: pg-13, words: 10000-29999

Comments 4

nannerz2cool March 24 2011, 13:56:11 UTC

This chapter is perhaps the most vivid of all of them so far! I can feel the pain of her injury and the cold of the wilderness.

She sucks it up, and she makes a choice. She will die. Everybody will, sometime. But Emily decides that she is not dying tonight. She is staying alive.

Love this.

“A pencil impaled Hotch in the thigh,” Spencer volunteers, sounding impressed.

I'm sure that's just the information Rossi was waiting for!

“How’s Emily?”

“I can hear you!” Emily calls, equal parts pain and fierceness lacing her voice.

She imagines the perplexed and amused look Rossi is giving them and a thin smile stretches her mouth, despite her current situation.

“She can hear us,” Rossi passes along, matter-of-factly. “Emily?” he asks loudly. “How are you?”

“Fine!” she insists, despite the fact that she is sweating, experiencing the most intense throbbing she has ever known. “Now let’s make a plan and get the hell out of here!”

Favorite! I can just see it.

“Garcia almost died on that case…running out to help somebody who was hurt. ( ... )

ficdirectory March 24 2011, 15:02:02 UTC

Ooh. I hoped so! I really wanted to make it believeable.

Love Em's inner-monologue!

Right? :)

Rossi and Em have such an intriguing relationship. In a way, she seems more of a daughter to him than any of the rest...

Can JJ and Emily just cuddle for warmth forever?

Thank you so much! So glad it came out as good as I hoped it would. And so glad you are enjoying this! <3

amichevole March 25 2011, 02:18:36 UTC

Fantastic work so far. Can definitely feel Emily's pain, and the fear and tension that's rippling through all of them.

Great job.

ficdirectory March 25 2011, 02:56:07 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm always surprised when someone finds something before I actually post it anywhere else, LOL. I appreciate it, though!