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Challenge #29 - Love is in the Air!

Feb 11, 2014 20:23

Title: Home, or something like it
Word Count: 269
Rating: G
Original/Fandom: Original (Tokyo Lights verse)
Pairings (if any): Nate/Benjamin
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/etc): None
Summary: You can't make your home in another person.

( Home, or something like it )

writerverse, slash, *verse: tokyo lights, *fandom: original

Comments 1

alien_writings February 16 2014, 04:04:29 UTC

I enjoyed reading this story. I remember reading another piece from the Tokyo Lights verse and enjoying that one, too.

Nate and Benjamin have an engaging relationship that makes me want to read more about it.

I quite liked the line about being unable to make a home in another person when you can't even make one in yourself. I also like how you called back to that line with the second to last line of this story.

Good job. :)