Challenge #26: Weekly Quick Fic #9

[lelek]

Title: Interpersonal Relations
Prompt: Swimming
Bonus? No
Word Count: 536
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Original (Tokyo Lights verse)
Pairings (if any): Nate/Benjamin (references to Nate/Michelle)
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con etc): Smoking.
Summary: "Michelle is coming. To Tokyo. To visit me."

Comments

[alien_writings]

I enjoyed this story and thought it was well written. You created a nice atmosphere here.

Already, I think I dislike Michelle because showing up like that without asking when you know you wouldn't get permission if you did ask is just rude.

What happened between Nate and Michelle? Why did they break up, and why is Michelle so convinced they'll get back together? I also want to know what Nate is going to do about his ex and if telling her about Benjamin will be easy at all.

Your story makes me want to know more. :)

[lelek]

Thank you so much!

This is the first Tokyo Lights story I've posted anywhere and I'm glad it's enjoyable even without the rest of it, like the backstory of Nate and Michelle. There will definitely be more! :)