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jolietjones July 25 2007, 08:46:03 UTC
Thanks for the great chapter. So intense.

The entire room was a crosshatch of insane sacrifice and familial devotion.

So true!

Does the story really end in three chapters? *mind boggles*

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ficangel July 29 2007, 20:46:28 UTC
I can't believe that Scheuring never twigged to the fact that Michael, Alex, and Steadman were all committing their actions, right or wrong, in the name of family, therefore Michael's sacrificing everything for Lincoln's sake does not automatically make him virtuous. For a man as smart as Scheuring is, that blind spot is just boggling.

And thanks for reading!

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jolietjones July 29 2007, 22:19:24 UTC

Yeah totally. And along those kind of lines I would have to say that a weak spot in the whole thing for me would be someone like Sara going out on a limb and leaving the door open for Michael.

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bromelia July 25 2007, 11:24:38 UTC
Wonderful chapter, brillian as always, and I look forward to reading more!

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ficangel July 29 2007, 20:42:05 UTC
I'm glad you liked!

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venetia_sassy September 10 2008, 12:15:24 UTC
Mustreadnextchapternow!

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