Sara is one tough cookie! I'm a total Alex fangirl but the way you write her has me rooting for her too. I'm fascinated by her perspective on it all especially with her sensing what's going on between Michael and Alex. She's not giving up and yet she's not turning it in to some kind of catfight which would be so easy to do.
And as for Linc and Jane, whew! You really captured the chemistry between them. It was interesting to see a slightly softer side to Jane as well but you didn't turn her mushy thank goodness, lol.
Sorry I didn't get to comment on the last two chapters, I've been having computer problems. I just wanted you to know I'm still really enjoying this.
I'm a total Alex fangirl but the way you write her has me rooting for her too. I'm fascinated by her perspective on it all especially with her sensing what's going on between Michael and Alex. She's not giving up and yet she's not turning it in to some kind of catfight which would be so easy to do.
This is easily one of the best comments that I've gotten yet. Trying to give Sara her fair shake while at the same time acknowledging that the story was turning more and more towards Michael/Alex was one of the toughest hurdles to clear. Thank you!
“You don’t owe me anything, Michael.” Because if he thought that he did, she knew, there would be no stopping him from paying that debt. The very idea horrified Sara, even though she was not sure that she liked the possibility of letting him go any more.
Okay, this section? Left me rather breathless again. I wonder how many people could be as strong and honest as Sara, even (or especially) with themselves.
As Lincoln was in a temper that was only barely being held in by the boundaries of his skin, he seemed even larger than he did when he was calm. It was easy to see how LJ could have lingered in the shadow of that without being seen.
Can I just say how much I've been enjoying your chapter-by-chapter reviews? Tremendously. They've been incredibly flattering, and I thank you for them.
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And as for Linc and Jane, whew! You really captured the chemistry between them. It was interesting to see a slightly softer side to Jane as well but you didn't turn her mushy thank goodness, lol.
Sorry I didn't get to comment on the last two chapters, I've been having computer problems. I just wanted you to know I'm still really enjoying this.
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This is easily one of the best comments that I've gotten yet. Trying to give Sara her fair shake while at the same time acknowledging that the story was turning more and more towards Michael/Alex was one of the toughest hurdles to clear. Thank you!
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Okay, this section? Left me rather breathless again. I wonder how many people could be as strong and honest as Sara, even (or especially) with themselves.
As Lincoln was in a temper that was only barely being held in by the boundaries of his skin, he seemed even larger than he did when he was calm. It was easy to see how LJ could have lingered in the shadow of that without being seen.
I could see this so clearly! So very Lincoln.
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