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Prison Break fic: A Walk-On Part in the War 10/20

Jul 06, 2007 18:38

TITLE: A Walk-On Part in the War ( Read more... )

prison break, a walk-on part in the war, prison break: michael/sara, prison break: michael/alex

Comments 5

belle_mystic July 7 2007, 06:17:53 UTC

I can't access to this chapter from PBSlash.

I like your writing and your story.

Your insights of your characters were very deep.
Like you're a psycologist.

Sorry I didn't review every chapter.

Thanks for writing.

ficangel July 7 2007, 17:04:51 UTC

I FUBARed that code something fierce, sorry. It's fixed now.

Thanks for reading! And, hey, don't worry about not commenting every chapter. I'm kind of slinging them out there fast and furious.

brushed_velvet July 7 2007, 17:50:02 UTC

Oh my! I so wasn't expecting the kiss there and then even though you've been building up to it so deliciously. Unexpected but hot, even with the awfulness of the circumstances. They finally acted upon what Sara could see... will she find out yet or what will she make of it if she does? Can't wait to find out...

I have to admit I'm a total Michael/Alex shipper, they are just so incredibly hot together.

I know the attraction is mutual here but I like how you at least acknowledge Michael lusting after Alex because a few Michael/Alex fics I've read tend to concentrate on how beautiful Michael is to Alex without showing the other side so thanks for that. I could lust after Alex all day long *sigh*

ficangel July 12 2007, 00:22:31 UTC

(Oh, sweetie, Michael lusting after Alex was not difficult to channel at all. Hmmm, William Fichtner and his lean hotness and glass-cutting cheekbones. 'Tis a happy place.)

I'm also glad that the Sara/Michael/Alex triangle is working for you, because I wasn't sure myself if I had really pulled it off in the rough draft. I'm a Michael/Sara shipper in addition to being a Michael/Alex shipper (honestly, if there was any group of people who would be best served by the chocolate and peanut butter solution to problems at the same time that the galloping issues between them make it nearly impossible...) at the same time that I am so ready to acknowledge and take advantage of the enormous issues that Michael and Sara have standing between them. On paper, there's no way that they could work, until SWC and Went get that chemistry of theirs going. Of course, Michael and Alex are exactly the same way.

venetia_sassy September 9 2008, 13:54:48 UTC

From that lovely, sweet moment between Michael and Sara in the kitchen to the fully dangerous kiss between Michael and Alex ... Alex continues to scare me. Just a bit.