Oh no, Pam! Pam is dead! And Alex finding her like that, just a little too late to save her, sob. At least Cam is still alive but I feel so gutted for Alex.
The tension in this chapter was so tight and almost unbearable... and the interaction between Jane and Alex felt so canon too. I'm really on tenterhooks to see where this will go next. More soon please.
(I have a mercenary streak that I have to admit to. I will totally kill a character that I'm not attached to, and a few that I am, in order to further my plot goals. Hee.)
The tension in this chapter was so tight and almost unbearable... and the interaction between Jane and Alex felt so canon too. I'm really on tenterhooks to see where this will go next. More soon please.
Thank you! I have trouble writing Aldo because of the whole part where I hate him, but I definitely wanted to put Alex, newly minted as an anti-Company agent, in a one-on-one scene with someone who's been there and done that and knows the stories.
Jane with religion was one of those character traits that I just threw in there because it wasn't what you would expect to see...only to find out later in the story that damned it doesn't work far better than even I expected. Thanks for reading!
Jane cringed as they took another turn at a speed that such a large vehicle was absolutely not meant to go when driven by someone of perhaps dubious sanity. ... Jane sounded as if she was starting to wonder who she had gotten into a vehicle with, and how quickly she could get out again.
Um, yeah, I'd be wondering too. I was torn between 'Pam! Cameron! Not Cameron! Poor Alex!' and thinking that Alex is scaring the hell out of me right now. I feel a bit breathless at this point.
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The tension in this chapter was so tight and almost unbearable... and the interaction between Jane and Alex felt so canon too. I'm really on tenterhooks to see where this will go next. More soon please.
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The tension in this chapter was so tight and almost unbearable... and the interaction between Jane and Alex felt so canon too. I'm really on tenterhooks to see where this will go next. More soon please.
Thank you! I have trouble writing Aldo because of the whole part where I hate him, but I definitely wanted to put Alex, newly minted as an anti-Company agent, in a one-on-one scene with someone who's been there and done that and knows the stories.
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Holy crap. Poor Pam, Poor Alex, Poor Cam!! And you've even got Jane praying!
I like the line about the red sheets.
Great story, thanks!
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Um, yeah, I'd be wondering too. I was torn between 'Pam! Cameron! Not Cameron! Poor Alex!' and thinking that Alex is scaring the hell out of me right now. I feel a bit breathless at this point.
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