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Prison Break: A Walk-On Part in the War 2/20

Jun 17, 2007 21:05

TITLE: A Walk-On Part in the War ( Read more... )

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happywriter06 June 18 2007, 13:09:10 UTC

This is excellent. Very in character for Lincoln. I just love his observations of his father, Jane and the safe house. I really admire anyone that can create dramatic tension. I was holding my breath waiting to see what would happen next.

ficangel June 20 2007, 19:34:20 UTC

Thank you so much! Especially since Lincoln is a very difficult character for me to get my head around and still keep sympathetic.

venetia_sassy September 7 2008, 13:11:09 UTC

Ahh, getting up close and personal with the Scofield-Burrows family dynamics. Complicated is not the word, not by a long shot!

The way you built up the tension here was amazing. It was so ... cold and still and bowstring-taught and when was it all going to snap.

Also? Jane is scary. I like Jane.