You've done such an outstanding job of blending Frost into the second movie, I'm said to think there's only one more part left. Reading this has been my own yuletide treasure this year.
I spotted one typo you might want to edit (not that it mesed up my enjoyment):
He meant to turn her, not to kill her. Nyssa gasped and made a small, pained sound as she realized what a terrible mistake that she had made, but it was too late by then. She could feel the poison already beginning to do its work, sapping her senses and making it difficult for her to move. Reinhardt[Should be Nomak] dropped her to the floor without ceremony; she barely registered the sound of Blade entering the scene at all.
Bleh, I am so notorious for those kinds of typos. The one chapter where I don't proof as carefully as is my normal wont...
And thank you! Feedback like this makes me all squishy inside. Especially since I was concerned that an AU that runs so close to the original was kind of redundant. There was some definite sweating going on.
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I spotted one typo you might want to edit (not that it mesed up my enjoyment):
He meant to turn her, not to kill her. Nyssa gasped and made a small, pained sound as she realized what a terrible mistake that she had made, but it was too late by then. She could feel the poison already beginning to do its work, sapping her senses and making it difficult for her to move. Reinhardt[Should be Nomak] dropped her to the floor without ceremony; she barely registered the sound of Blade entering the scene at all.
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And thank you! Feedback like this makes me all squishy inside. Especially since I was concerned that an AU that runs so close to the original was kind of redundant. There was some definite sweating going on.
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