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Round 1 - Crime - Team B - "The Curious Case of Draco Malfoy"

Nov 29, 2009 18:22

Title: The Curious Case of Draco Malfoy
Author:mamalaz
Team: Ron
Prompt: Crime
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Length: 7,800 words
Summary: Secret walls, gaudily decorated interiors and Draco Malfoy acting suspicious - it's all in a day's work for Ron Weasley, Private Investigator.

Disclaimer: All sexual activity portrayed in this fic is between two consenting ( Read more... )

round 1: crime, submission

Comments 37

aigooism November 30 2009, 01:46:54 UTC

LOLOLOL. This was so Ron and Draco. The entire plot was so amusing!

mamalaz December 13 2009, 18:30:31 UTC

It was fun to write! I'm pleased it was funny, I worried it would fall flat! :)

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mamalaz December 13 2009, 18:28:22 UTC

Any excuse to get Ron by Draco's crotch :D

k8matty November 30 2009, 09:25:22 UTC

You had me at smoke machine at Ron's feet *snort* and it just kept getting better.

This was hilarious; truly loved reading every bit. Brava!

mamalaz December 13 2009, 18:27:54 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

Loved, loved this story! thrihyrne November 30 2009, 14:56:10 UTC

I'll quote back some of my favorite lines, but mystery author, you have a fabulous imagination and really creative, vibrant imagery and snappy dialogue. What a delight to read! Out of many, here are just a few lines that really jumped out at me:
Ron found himself staring into the gut of a man who made Gregory Goyle look like an underfed bird

Ron, who couldn’t understand how this much bad taste could exist in one room without it simply imploding in self disgust,

And that was when Ron saw him in all his ferrety, prickish glory, sitting on a stool by the neon lit bar and sipping an elaborately constructed cocktail.

Stupid, horny feet.

Pansy, her eyebrow raised as she sat behind her desk, eyed his actions with such an expression of boredom that it was likely she had died somewhere between opening the door and that very moment.

He looked remarkably like a gazelle attempting to both befriend and escape a hungry lion.You have quite the way of telling a story, with abundant humor and it's certainly memorable! Thank you for writing this ( ... )

Re: Loved, loved this story! mamalaz December 7 2009, 23:12:29 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you! It was surprisingly fun to write!

l3petitemort November 30 2009, 21:28:57 UTC

i can't even tell you how much i love this! it's witty; your characterizations were spot-on and hilarious (i especially loved pansy draco-as-pansy, haha), and the whole thing was just immensely fun and creative and charming.

i almost died at the end when draco turned back into himself and was still in his pansy clothes, haha...

i love this so damn much!

mamalaz December 6 2009, 17:15:05 UTC

Thank you! :) It was so much fun writing Draco in drag!