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sekky_chan Title: I Hear Your Heartbeat In The Dark
Pairings/Characters: Ueda/Nakamaru
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mutants!AU (sort of). Allures to various science fields. Saccharine fluff.
Notes: To RB, my wonderful beta: Thank you for the music, the tolerance, and the constant ego boosts. To my recipient: Writing this has made me very happy; I
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Ueda glowing when he's happy and Nakamaru floating when he's angry, ugh ♥ I love all the Powers you thought up and how you named them (air-skimmers fhdskj <3); so creative. And then all the details: Ueda's mom being an electric type and making Ueda's hair spiky, and how an electric type mom plus a supernova dad gives birth to a plasma boy (I got all !!!!!!!\*o*/ irl when Ueda being a plasma type was revealed btw <3), and you even slipped in a wig joke fhdskjsjk best ♥ The fluff was so fluffy too *rolls in* Nakamaru makes Ueda glow--JUST HOW CUTE IS THAT. and then the image of Ueda having to get rope to stop Nakamaru from floating away fhdskj lovelovelove. The creativity of it all blew me away; if you ever consider writing spin-offs in this AU-verse, I WANT. *_*b ♥
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(About spin-offs, well... >.>)
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And awwwww Ueda's power is perfect because Nakamaru cannot sleep in complete darkness.
I really enjoyed this fic and all the references made are so spot on. Even though this is set in AU but I have no problem to imagine anything at all!
Good job and thank you for sharing this awesome fic!
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The relationship build up is also very smooth, from good friends when they're kids to them growing up and noticing (sexy) things about the other ;) I also love how the ending kiss repeats the conversation of when they first met.
Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it!<3
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all of it
especially the world, and how effortlessly you built it
also i love the whole journey we get to go on, from meeting when they're kids and then through school and onwards. their silly arguments, and goodness gracious, that sweet kiss. i just love everything about this okay i ran out of words :'3
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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