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sashjun Title: Step by Step
Pairings/Characters: Nakamaru/Ueda
Rating:NC-17
Warnings: feelings
Notes: Hi there ♥ I really hope you like this. I also hope there isn’t too much feelings in this for you, but they just wouldn’t go away. 6558 words. Thank you to my cheerleader and to my beta ♥
Summary: Nakamaru likes Ueda. And Kame says Ueda
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I loved how you wrote all their characters, and hence, this read very believable for me.
Especially Ueda, I can't tell you how much I loved his head in all this.
A particular favorite:
“Did you plan this?” Nakamaru asks, a little too quietly, eyes wide.
“Is it a bad thing if I did?” It better not be. But if it is, Ueda will blame Kame.
“No.”
Ueda wants to high five Nakamaru, because no, it wasn’t a bad thing, but he realizes that’s not too appropriate.
I adore Ueda's over eager dorky side coming out and him wanting to high five over his little victory seems so spot on :DDD
And the blaming Kame part too hahaha
So much love for the maruda interactions ♥♥♥
The teasing, the comfortableness, how they know each other so well ("curious little stalker" Nakamaru really got me xD)
The non-date where they ate ice cream and hung out at a pet store ;A;
Their adorable cheesiness <3333
And the sex, so hot *______*
I really, really loved this a lot. Thanks so much for making it all happen ♥
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Anyway, thank you for such a lovely comment. I'm really happy you enjoyed this.
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First of all, it’s very rare to see fics where the protagonist is the one being pined for and that really got me because of that fact that he had to be told by a third party (and oh man, Kame in this) and secondly because he’s convinced that he definitely doesn’t feel the same way.
“Okay, then write a song for him.”
I love how it’s such a precise thing Ueda could do for Nakamaru but somehow it really would be most appropriate for Ueda, of all people, to do.
It’s a mystery how Ueda could’ve not noticed. Now that he knows, it’s crushing into him like a ( ... )
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It’s definitely something in the minimalistic honesty he puts forward about how he just simply really likes Ueda and even in the middle of all this awkward, they’re so comfortable together that Maru can even return the semi-callous jibes.
He looks pretty tired, a bit haggard, his shirt crumpled, hair a bit overgrown for his current style and his face hasn’t been shaven… It kind of suits him. But Ueda knows Nakamaru well enough to guess that he’s probably quite uncomfortable.
*__________* What a great image.
“Ueda Tatsuya, if I’m working my ass off here only to save your gay porn, you are so dead,” he says, and his ears are actually red. LOL this is perfect. And just the prospect of Nakamaru spotting the files and clicking them open in order to know what they are. And how Ueda actually has gay porn and that ( ... )
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I really like how you transition scenes. Ueda’s mind cuts to Kame speaking it for both Nakamaru and Ueda. Perfect.
Ueda is about to send Kame home.
I love that this sounds like it happens a lot. Kame visits and speaks inconvenient truths and Ueda gets tired of it.
“Look, it doesn’t have to be anything epic.” Ueda knows Kame is lying. That he secretly thinks Nakamaru deserves epic.
AWWWWWWW whaaat awwww ;A;
“You read too much fanfiction. You really should tone it down.” Ueda frowns.
“Well you should know that in fanfiction, you’re usually the sensitive one, not the emotionally stunted one. That is Nishikido’s role.”
I spluttered and everything is suddenly just beautiful in this verse because Kame reads fanfic and oh god, I can’t.
Of course their thighs brush, but unlike in Kame’s fiction, it just makes Nakamaru jump and move away. Ueda still catches him staring at his collarbones or at ( ... )
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I would use more words to describe my utter admiration and the applause this smut deserves but I would only embarrass you and myself lol. But I want you to know it’s been ages since I’ve read a sex scene that steamy and blush-inducing. Fantastic, author-san.
“No one’s buying your prude act now, Yuichi. You’ve just been moaning so filthy I was a little shocked.”
“You liked it,” Nakamaru whispers, stretching to do so right into Ueda’s ear. “Next time, I want to fuck you,” he adds.
*expires permanently; the rest of this comment will be forwarded to you from the bowels of hell*
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thank you <3<3<3
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Thanks for a funny, sweet, sexy (the sex was hooooot - especially after all the waiting!) fic!
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The mention of Ueda slipping back into his old way made me so happy.
and the quotes ♥ and just everything about this comment. I am so happy you enjoyed the fic. fhjsfgjs ♥ THANK YOU!!!
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