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FIC FOR TATOEBA (part 4)

Mar 24, 2011 20:26

For: tatoeba
From: reiicharu

Title: Cross a Great Divide
Pairing: past Jinda, past Akame, Kameda, past KoKamePi, Nakanishi, ShuKira
Rating: R for angst and sexual content and naked people
Warning:Slashy gen, humour, angst, drama, naked Yamapi, naked people in general, continuous Ryo-Jin banter, plushies.
Notes: tatoeba, I hope you enjoy!
Summary:It starts with the ( Read more... )

year: 2011, rated: r, p: jin/nakamaru, p: jin/kame, p: kame/ueda, p: jin/ueda

Comments 31

je_levy March 31 2011, 06:50:09 UTC

It would be impossible for me to leave a coherent comment, but I want you to know that you made me get teary and that's rather difficult to do. I feel as if you've captured my deepest imaginings of the melodrama-version of the KT dynamic so it really hit home.

Reading this from beginning to end was a pleasure in that you're an excellent writer, but painful in the sense of your touching on some things that definitely made me very D: for quite a bit.

I think the point where I basically head-grasped was Jin and Kame in the closet for the last time. I can see Kame's side of it and I imagine for him it must've been like watching himself doing something perfectly awful while Jin retaliated in his own helpless, simple-headed way.

Gorgeously heart-breaking, and I just loved it to bits.

reiicharu April 2 2011, 14:04:46 UTC

absinthe1213 March 31 2011, 10:21:47 UTC

hmmmm~~~
i'm dumbstruck at this...

reiicharu April 2 2011, 14:05:06 UTC

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reiicharu April 2 2011, 14:06:35 UTC

wintersdancer April 5 2011, 23:20:05 UTC

THE DRAMA, OH THE DRAMA!

So...I don't exactly know what to say. It took be forever to read it because LJ was/is bitching so D: And now it's almost 1.30 am and I suck at writing comments but I'd really like to show you at least a tiny bit of how much I liked this story ♥ It was great in each and every detail (and I'm afraid this is the only thing I can say D:).

Thanks a lot for writing this, it was really great! ♥

reiicharu April 26 2011, 11:52:16 UTC

randomicicle April 23 2011, 06:00:16 UTC

Kame is such a mess. It hurts so so good. We're such sadist, or I am, for liking how fragile he is and how battered he's usually in fics. And yet I hate him for pulling Jin into that broom's closet, because Maru can get hurt because of that and even though he's messed up and Jin is just another person (that alone is cringe worthy and fascinating), it's. just. wrong. Wy isn't Jin leaving?!

Self-destructive sociopath

The scene from the broom closet had me clutching my blanket so hard. It was destructive from every point of view and Kame, later. Being found like that. It's. just. I'm dreading the end. And this, Violation, usage, is that what this is? It'll never cease to be interesting, how he was asking for it and being obnoxious when he knew, they all knew, it'd hurt.

asjhads

He could-can-make everyone scream his name; confess their love but he’s never been able to touch hearts. >> I'm weeping ( ... )

reiicharu April 26 2011, 12:03:55 UTC

randomicicle April 26 2011, 16:41:45 UTC

Well, now I do feel like a stalker. But thank you for taking the time and go over some things, I really really love all the thought you've put in here and it showed, it was lovely ♥. The love story between Kame and Taguchi it's certainly something I'd love to see, because he needs his happy ending. But for now, I'd close it and say it was a great read. Probably one of the best I've had lately (flail, srsly, it got insane). Thank you for giving us such a gem, dear ♥)