FIC FOR UEPIXIE

Mar 23, 2011 17:17

For: uepixie
From: imifumei

Title: Bomb in a Birdcage
Pairings/Characters: Koki/Ueda
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: This is kind of really sappy. I mean super really. AU
Notes: This was inspired by the lyrics of What I Wouldn't Do by A Fine Frenzy. uepixie, I had intended to write you gen, but it just worked better with romance, so . . . I hope you like it. :Dv?
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year: 2011, p: koki/ueda, rated: pg-13

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yararanger March 23 2011, 16:33:23 UTC
SHRIEKS UEDA/KOKI IS THIS REALLY REAL AND MINE????????

omg ksfdgjhfshg Koki a clothing designer it's so perfect ;A;

Secretly, Koki was something of a sentimental fool

fshkgdfjhg YES TT^TT ♥

It's a warm, sunny afternoon here so the whole part about the sunlight streaming into the carriage and dozing off on his dad's shoulder made me tear up for real ;~; such warm nostalgic feelings ;~;

OMG MY HEART TT^TT AND THERE'S ULTRAMAN. TT^TT ♥

'Himself' was a confused, unsure boy who alternately strove for conformity or individualism, who laughed at weird things, who had trouble expressing himself without the occasional use of his fists. But all of those things were okay because Ueda was those things too sometimes

fgkhjdfkhjg CAN I JUST QUOTE THIS WHOLE THING AT YOU. THE WHOLE FIC OMG. It's so… adskjhgsdjgs fluffy happy yay feelings omg TT^TT

Ueda had just been saying how the soundtrack of Rurouni Kenshin may very well revolutionize the face of pop music foreverI love this so much, author-san ;A; I love all the references and THINGS ( ... )

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yararanger March 23 2011, 16:38:52 UTC
Also I didn't know the song but it's really pretty and summery so now I am going to download it \(*-*)/ ♥

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yararanger March 23 2011, 16:57:19 UTC
I STILL CAN'T GET OVER THERE BEING KOKI AND UEDA FIC THAT WAS WRITTEN FOR ME. so happy kajhgdsagf ♥

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imifumei April 2 2011, 17:38:09 UTC
I love you bunches and I am so glad you liked this. Thank you for such beautiful flail. It really made me feel like I accomplished my goal of writing something perfect for you.
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alienashi March 23 2011, 21:58:53 UTC
Dear Anon-san,

I love how you have made this such a simple piece with some of the most beautiful imageries ever - the small village and the tree and the shops Koki revisited. I love your portrayal of Koki's life as a child in an idyllic village where nothing was too complicated, and where everything honest and straightforward. I love how everything has this fantastical air in it, but oh-so-real in a way that we can imagine how things happened precisely. But most of all, I love how it's so effective in the portrayal of the best aspects of Koki and Ueda's relationship.

THANK YOU SO MUCH, I HEART YOU FOREVER.

Love,

...me?

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creamy_amande March 24 2011, 00:11:50 UTC
Okay I admit, I haven't read anything for months, maybe a year, I'm only Ueda/someone so this one is in my fancies, but OMG I loved it!
I can't read Ueda in nc-17 other than with some people but this one is not! It's perfectly fluff and totally safe and I looooved it!

It's beautiful and how Koki made his way to the world and came back for once thing and probably will go to the city with THAT thing again!
A very soothing story, thank you anon, I'm melting

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sashjun March 24 2011, 21:07:51 UTC
Oh *___* this was beautiful. It also kind of hurt all kind of good. I love the train scene a lot, the way the smell and the light and the warmth and the memories of it were described. I also liked the way you described the comfortable evolution of a friendship and the "bomb" that feelings of love brought to it. And just <3 so many things were pretty and somehow felt right, and I don't really tend to identify with feelings and thoughts in fic but Koki definitely struck a string or two. And I love how Ueda was still in this fic, quietly but so perfectly.

JUST! Yeah this was wonderful.
... )

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starg8fan_liz March 28 2011, 06:02:13 UTC
sooo sweeeet♥♥♥♥ love this XD

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