AJ/Brian or Howie/Brian
I know I haven't contributed in a while, but I've had a crappy, crappy day and I was wondering if anyone could write me something? Either AJ/Brian or Howie/Brian, I don't care. Just so long as it's happy. Or angsty ending in happy. Thank you so much in advance.
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You don't know me but I'm a big fan of yours, and so I decided to write this little thingie for you. Please be kind, it's my first attempt :)
The gentle rasp of tongue against flushed skin. Stuttering breaths of air with each rise and fall of his chest. Fluttering heartbeat hammering against his fingertips as he catches the bony wrists in his grip. He touches him with all his senses, he feels him with all his senses ( ... )
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First of all, I'm so sorry I haven't replied sooner. I've been away all week and then I come to this! OH MY GOD. This is your FIRST attempt?! Holy shit. This is so, so beautiful. The imagery, the description - oh my goodness, I can barely breathe.
The scent of him; spice and smoke, an exotic combination of all the elements. The feel of him; warmed silk stretched over the sharp prominent bones and hard lean muscle. The sight of him; head tilted back, eyes of velvet brown closed tightly, thick twists of eyelashes curling against passion-reddened cheeks, swollen lower lip caught on the sharp white of teeth. The sound of him; rising pleas and whispered wantings, hitched breathing and constant cries. The taste of him; warm honey and hot cinnamon, the sweetest of all sins.
I have to paste the entire paragraph because I love it all. I cannot get over how beautiful this is. It's like flowing poetry. AJ is so stunning in this and you use the senses Brian describe him with SO well. Just. Gah. How could you think I would not like ( ... )
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I can't tell you how much your kind words mean to me. Praise from you no less. Thank you so much, it feels like a huge weight has been lifted off my shoulders knowing you enjoyed it, so once again, thank you soooo very much <3
I think I now see why other writers love getting feedback for their work, I have to say it's a great feeling. =)
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*gives two thumbs up* i could definitely get used to reading that. sweet mother of god, that was... really hott and sensual and... very a-roky... thank you for writing it even though it wasn't my request :D
keep up the excellent work!
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That means alot knowing you enjoyed it, so once again thank you for your feedback =)
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