It's been an elephant in the room for the whole night, for the game, for the day before. Justin wonders what the hell this is, because it sure as hell isn't a challenge for the children. It's a fucking challenge for him. Fuck the kids
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JC's looking as if he's the one watching out for Chris, now. "You are both going to finish your dinner, and if you two want to start disputes at any kind, have the common decency to do it behind closed doors
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The shifting dynamics were fascinating, the things said and those unsaid.
Justin feels like he's driftwood. Glamourous, successful driftwood. Even the most successful and glamourous driftwood is what it is. A part of something more that got washed away in the tide.
Ouch, poor guy, you can see how diconnected he feels, how cut off. Which has to be such a contrast when he was with the others, friends with them all and in a relationship with Chris and JC.
Direct body language, stone cold faces, steel cores. Justin thinks the odds will never even out in his favor with the both of them ever again.
Just lovely description for another ouch moment.
Then the privacy of the hotel room, where everything changes again. I was reading thinking things could never be fixed, but with every word things slipped back into place, and by this When they're both done, Justin slides into the middle of the bed, into the middle JC and Chris, sliding into the creases where he belongs, placing himself so he becomes whole again. I was
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The shifting dynamics were fascinating, the things said and those unsaid.
Justin feels like he's driftwood. Glamourous, successful driftwood. Even the most successful and glamourous driftwood is what it is. A part of something more that got washed away in the tide.
Ouch, poor guy, you can see how diconnected he feels, how cut off. Which has to be such a contrast when he was with the others, friends with them all and in a relationship with Chris and JC.
Direct body language, stone cold faces, steel cores. Justin thinks the odds will never even out in his favor with the both of them ever again.
Just lovely description for another ouch moment.
Then the privacy of the hotel room, where everything changes again. I was reading thinking things could never be fixed, but with every word things slipped back into place, and by this When they're both done, Justin slides into the middle of the bed, into the middle JC and Chris, sliding into the creases where he belongs, placing himself so he becomes whole again. I was ( ... )
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*applauds*
That was phenominal, Lyds.
Bravo!
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