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FIC- Yami no Matsuei- for lirren

Feb 12, 2007 19:10

Title: Best Friends With Benefits
Fandom: Yami no Matsuei
Pairing Watari/Tsuzuki
Rating: NC-17 for graphic sex

For lirren's request

( Best Friends With Benefits )

yami no matsuei, fic

Comments 1

lirren February 13 2007, 12:17:19 UTC

Yay! Thank you thank you! This was just full of wonderful. I was giggling so much at the beginning. These two are just so much fun together.

“Are you sure you should be drinking so much?” Watari asked. “I won’t kiss you if you throw up.”

I don't know why, but I love that line so much.

“Not a problem!” Tsuzuki exclaimed. “My stomach is so strong that they call me the boa constrictor.”

Watari thought this over. “Who’s ‘they?’”

“Huh?”

“You said that ‘they’ call you the boa constrictor. Who’s ‘they?’”

“Uh, you know, ‘they.’” Tsuzuki hung his head. “Okay, I call myself the boa constrictor.”

That had me laughing out loud! My husband even turned around to ask what was so funny.

I loved all the teasing and slow lead up to more. I adored the little line about turning Tatsumi green (HAHAHAHAHA!!). And yes, Watari, you do indeed have a great best friend. Thank you so much, veleda_k for filling my request!