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Episode Nine: Kinetic Motion - ensemble - R

Oct 16, 2006 23:01

Title: Season Three - Episode Nine: Kinetic Motion
Author: fickledame
Rating: There is character death, bad language, dark themes and sex in the season. The series is rated a strong R overall, but occationally strays to NC-17.
Characters: All main cast.
Word Count: Every episode differs, but this one is 7229.
Summary: This is the ninth episode ( Read more... )

r, ensemble, fickledame

Comments 24

berry_hearts October 16 2006, 22:57:00 UTC

gah. poor little weevil's neice....
poor dick.
poor logan. i hate seeing sappy logan, because then i start to blame veronica...and logan isn't perfect even though i think that most of the time....damn his cuteness! I really liked it. Honestly i was like "meh" when i first read this, but now that toby is out....hmmm....color me intrigued.

fickledame October 17 2006, 00:59:48 UTC

Thanks for the feedback!

I'm glad you liked it, and like it more now than the beginning.

Hope you like the final!

rowanceleste October 16 2006, 23:06:37 UTC

I absolutely loved it. I'm glad Veronica and Logan finally had sex even though Veronica chickened at the thought of a relationship. Needless to say, at least this way, with her talking about it with Logan she is making a decision based on how she feels when he's not in her life now compared to the possibility of having him in her life but losing him later. At least this way their relationship is not a decision that she just fell into that she immediately regrets because she's scared. Not sure what's going on with Toby but I feel bad for Weevil. Veronica will learn to look at tapes in slo-mo now just to make sure she doesn't falsely accuse anyone of child abuse. Whoopsie.

fickledame October 17 2006, 01:52:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad to hear your thoughts. I agree - I don't think Veronica should bounce from Toby to Logan in a second, but take things slower.

Heh, that is true! She will learn from her mistakes. :)

Thanks for the feedback!

flinkkamingo3 October 17 2006, 01:59:36 UTC

You kill me on a regular bases. And I have to say, I don't hate it.

I love that Veronica and Logan had sex but it didn't just magically fix everything. Very realistic. And not to mention it causes much more drama and angst, which I absolutely love. Excellent update. I think it pretty much goes without saying that I'll be refreshing my flist ever few minutes on the off chance that you suddenly had a brainstorm and finished the last chapter.

fickledame October 17 2006, 02:07:46 UTC

Aw, thank you so much!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! No, I don't think it would solve everything, so glad you see that too! :D

Aw, I AM writing the chapter as we speak, but there's no way it will be anytime soon. I am sorry, but I'm a slow writer. I'm trying my hardest!

Thanks again for the feedback!

jen_knee_suu October 17 2006, 02:45:19 UTC

But..I need to know now too! And I think I'm emotional tonight for some reason cause Logan almost made me cry! I just wanted to reach in the story and give him a hug.
And Weevil..and his niece. I hate when lil kids are hurt.
As for Dick..he needs to invest his trust fund. He took FBLA!:)
Awesome job. I loved it :) Actually I've loved the whole thing!

fickledame October 17 2006, 11:58:51 UTC

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you like it!

I don't think Dick has the braincells. ;) He was probably just there 'coz Logan signed up.

Thanks so much for the feedback! Love your icon.

anonymous October 17 2006, 03:53:52 UTC

what about mac? sad about the litte girl.

fickledame October 17 2006, 12:00:03 UTC

Sorry, I don't get what you mean. Mac was in the fic... It was a short scene with Wallace, but they didn't really have a part in the mystery.