Episode Five: Tequila Mockingbird - ensemble - R

[fickledame]

Title: Season Three - Episode Five: Tequila Mockingbird
Author: fickledame
Rating: There may be character death, bad language, dark themes and possibly sex all somewhere down the line. The series is rated strong R overall.
Characters: All main cast.
Word Count: Every episode will differ, but this one is 7700.
Summary: This is the fifth episode

Comments

[berry_hearts]

very good. and hey! a mystery was solved! that's new! hehe.

[fickledame]

Thanks! Actually there has been a mystery solved in every episode, but - thanks!

[berry_hearts]

hmmm... maybe i am slow???? ?? ??
hmmm...maybe if they were posted closer together i would remember! LOL. j/k

[fickledame]

I would love to post more often, but they take a lot of time. I can't write very often, and to keep it more than a page, have mystery and development, have everyone I want to look over it do so, and then make the final changes is a time consuming process! I do try, and I've put hours and hours and hours into this already. My aim is to finish it before season three, so that should help.

Thanks again.

[nil_nyx]

Your mysteries are so good. I always cant figure them out until you reveal them. Oh and i loved the Gimore Girls reference. Defenitely Jess :-)....Waiting for more episodes soon

[fickledame]

Aw, thank you! Oh yes, totally Jess!

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

[marshmallows08]

great update! i've been following this at the loveshack and this is actually my first time to comment here. wonderful story, i love how you have put original characters into this... i've always wondered how it's going to be next season when new characters will come into the story. yours work very well... i also like how you give each character their own sort of story line. it's not all about veronica, every one has their own life... and the mysteries per chapter are great too! i wonder where you get all your ideas... okay, i've been rambling. last comment though, i think it's great how you made me like Toby even though i'm a HUGE LoVe shipper. it's a good read to watch and wait what's gonna happen between toby, veronica and logan. me ♥ this!

[fickledame]

Thank you! Comments are always appreciated!

Aw, thanks so much. Glad you like the OCs. It's always so risky to add them. People don't exactly like them, but it's impossible to write a season without adding some - especially in a new place. Thank you! I don't come up with them all by myself - the people listed in the credits usually have input - or someone gives me a gist of an idea and I flesh it out.

I'm SO glad some people like Toby! I understand people not shipping him with V, but everyone just plain hates him. ;)

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest.

[havemy_heart]

I didn't realize I hadn't commented on this chapter yet. Sorry! I really hope that Logan and Veronica can rebuild their relationship now that he's out of rehab. I really liked their late-night talks on the beach. They should definitely start out being friends first and go from there. Logan really hurt Veronica when he left, and she's never been quick to trust anyway, so they need to take it slow. Stupid Toby is still in the way though. He can't be trusted

[fickledame]

Hee, no problem!

I'm glad you liked the talks on the beach. More to come. *G*

I think so too. They seem to jump from one extreme to the other, then go badly wrong. I agree - he really broke her trust, and so just to forgive him like that isn't in character.

Hehe, poor Toby. *Some* people like him. Ah well.

Thank you so much! Glad you are still enjoying it. :)

[moustrich]

Great episode. I really liked this. I wonder who was trying to hurt Veronica in the first place. I can't wait to read more.

[fickledame]

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it.