Episode Four: The Fallen Man - ensemble - R

[fickledame]

Title: Season Three - Episode Four: The Fallen Man
Author: fickledame
Rating: There may be character death, bad language, dark themes and possibly sex all somewhere down the line. The series is rated strong R overall.
Characters: All main cast.
Word Count: Every episode will differ, but this one is 7853.
Summary: This is the forth episode in a

Comments

[mishane]

Dead people!

Ah man, Veronica's talking to Logan? Dammit to hell!

[fickledame]

Hee!

Not happy with her doing so?

[mishane]

Eh, I don't know. My love of the V/L relationship has its ups and downs. The only reason I'm more against it in your fic is because I've read so many fics where the author will give Veronica another boyfriend only to come up with some idiotic (not that your reason will be idiotic) reason for him to be bad and Logan to be good. I kind of want to read a fic where it't not happily ever after for Veronica and Logan. *gasp* I know. I think I've only read one other fic where they didn't end up together but the outcome was still happy and non-angsty. I can't remember who wrote it though. ANYWAYS, yeah, I'm iffy on the Veronica and Logan relationship in your fic because (not because of the writing) but because I just don't want Toby to be screwed and for Logan to automatically come out to be the good guy.

[thedorkygirl]

See, and I was wondering if something were up with the non-alcoholic drinks from Josh and if Toby were going to get hurt somehow. I briefly considered the Toby=bad, but he seems like an honestly sweet character, yeah?

So maybe (if it ends up V/L, whatev) Toby getting screwed means Toby getting offed, ya think?

[afrocurl]

You killed a good number of people here...Good job!

I really liked the therapy session Logan had--it seems like he'd want to avoid talking about Veronica because of the myriad issues together.

Hee--you brought back Richie! I've missed him.

Keith seems to be a bit too busy for me, but I guess he's not always the best dad.

[fickledame]

Hee, thank you! I do love killing people in fics.

I love Richie! Glad you liked his appearance.

That is true. They will have to hang out soon. :)

Thanks again!

[flinkkamingo3]

Woah. This was way intense.

Well, I like that Veronica is talking to Logan.

I am very intrigued here. Great job, as usual.

[fickledame]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

I'm always surprised when someone doesn't like Logan! I know there are plenty of such people, but it's always like - you don't!?

[flinkkamingo3]

I know! I mean, I'm completely in love with him. I find it impossible that everyone else isn't as well.

[lovewatermelon]

Wow - a lot of death in one episode! I think this may be the first time I've commented on your series of episodes, but I am really enjoying the story. I can't wait to see where it goes!

[fickledame]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I hope you like future chapters too. ;)

[havemy_heart]

I guess I can cross off Sarah and Scott from my suspect list. I still don't trust Toby! And I think he got her that job to have Josh watching her when he couldn't be. How awful for Sarah that her boyfriend was killed, and over something so stupid! And then Veronica and Wallace have to listen to John kill Jamie. No wonder Veronica isn't sleeping.

I loved Logan's therapy session. It sounds like he finally figured out that he needs to change for himself, and that Veronica isn't the sole reason. I'm also glad that he called her, and that despite her best efforts, Veronica can't stop caring about him.

And now Kendall is dead? I wonder how it's connected to everything else. Excellent update. Each chapter is even more intense than the previous, and I'm thinking a mile a minute trying to figure everything out.

[fickledame]

Well, yes to Scott, but anyone else is fair game. ;)

I'm glad you liked the Logan scene! It was a hard scene to write, and props to Ky for helping me get what I wanted across. Yeah, I don't think Veronica could ever not care for Logan. Even when he was a fucking asshole to her for a year, and did all matter of sucktastic things, she dropped everything and helped him when his mum died.

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Try not to think too much, you might guess more than I want you to. :P

[havemy_heart]

Sorry! I usually suck at figuring out mysteries, but I'm sure having fun with this one :-)

[fickledame]

Hee, I was only kidding! Guess away! :P