Fic: "All Fall Down" (R) Veronica/Logan, Keith [5/22]

[truemyth]

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 33,500 to date
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 5: Catch and Fetch ‘Em
Author: truemyth
Additional Characters: Lamb, Sacks, Norris, Back-Up
Rating: R

Comments

[hugecerealbox]

Excellent chapter! I have a few favorites lines and loved the imagery: comparing Veronica and Keith's issue avoidance to a dance. Love it! The scene in Bad Kitty was classic! My favorite elements of Logan's character, his quirky, dirty sense of humor and his ability to empathyze and help V emotionally, were showcased perfectly in that mall section.

This was funny, dark and heartbreaking. I can hardly wait to figure out the mysteries as well as the in-depth look at the relationships, and how perfectly these two are combined and flow together

[truemyth]

Thanks for the great comment. I love using dances as metaphors for human reactions. Different dances for different relationships. I think it helps a reader picture the rhythm of an interaction if they can imagine the music and steps that characterize it. I love all the facets of Logan and I'm so pleased to hear I've portrayed them well.

If you have any speculation on the major mysteries, my fellow writers would love to hear them. However, they are more likly to see them if you comment to the main post at vm_summer.

Thanks for reading!