Admitting Defeat - Lost - Gen (Charles)

[toestastegood]

Title: Admitting Defeat
Characters: Charles Widmore, Penny (Desmond/Penny)
Word Count: 638
Rating: PG
A/N: For day two of Lost Riffs, the location prompt. They always say to write what you know, so here's a post-island ficlet set in Princes Street Gardens and Princes Mall in Edinburgh this morning.
Summary: "Charles hates Scotland in winter -

Comments

[gottalovev]

how clever of you to use today and where you were this morning! =D

(sorry about the weather ;) )

ahhh Charles. feeling too good for the common places he's in, how well described. but love wins over money, pal!

I like your Penny a whole lot ♥

[slybrunette]

That is such a great idea to use what you know (totally gave me a plot bunny)!

I love how clearly I can picture this, and I love Penny here. Wonderful fic!

[janie_tangerine]

Well... GO DES you win! This really made me feel happy and I'm not sorry for Widmore an inch even if you made him kind of likable and I usually can't stand him at all ;) I really liked this.

[alemyrddin]

That was wonderful! Finally, a happy ending. :)

Also, I'm sorry the weather wasn't great, but Edinburgh, as far as I remember it (I've been there for a few days a couple of years ago) was really a nice town.

[elliotsmelliot]

I love that you made Mr. Widmore a regular dad, not some diabolical madman. He's still an asshole but here he's a relatable one and you can hope that he will eventually be happy for his daughter. It was also great how you made the smells and sights of the food court come to life.