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Mastery - Heroes - Mohinder/Sylar

Mar 23, 2009 22:47

Title: Mastery
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Word Count: 506
Rating: R
Warnings: D/s, spanking
A/N: Set in the For Them 'verse. Written for comment_fic.
Summary: Sylar teaches Mohinder a lesson.

( Mastery )

pairing:mohinder/sylar, i'm a perv, fandom:heroes, verse:for them, character:sylar, character:mohinder suresh, challenge:comment_fic

Comments 7

megmatthews20 March 23 2009, 22:59:14 UTC

My heart is pounding. My mouth is dry...

*looks around* Did I take my blood pressure meds today? *faints from the hotness*

You. own. my. SOUL!

cheers! <33333333333333

nothingtosay March 23 2009, 23:08:12 UTC

OM nom nom nom nom nom nom :o

I love the "For Them" 'verse, like the perverse little madam I am. Thank you!

mabetini March 23 2009, 23:10:42 UTC

Nnnn...nnnnng...

Good god.

Want. Moar.

megmatthews20 March 23 2009, 23:37:41 UTC

IAWTC!

blossommorphine March 23 2009, 23:41:31 UTC

AGREED!

<3

spinawebofsound March 24 2009, 05:49:38 UTC

Oh yeah spanking kinky Mylar, definitely a firm favourite of mine. I love how stubborn Mo is.

levitatethis March 25 2009, 01:17:54 UTC

I love the way you play with the power dynamic here. Even with Mohinder in a submissive position you still manage to have him retain a certain stubborness and assertiveness in his attempt at defiance. I love how Sylar is turned on by both Mohinder's refusal to "give in" and that in this particular situation he has that control over Mohinder he's always desired but can't get in a "normal" scenario.

They're both incredibly turned on by the melding of what they want and what they're willing (and unwilling) to show. You can just imagine the internal conflict going through Mohinder's mind. I really appreciate how you have Sylar respond to Mohinder's strength. Yes, there's an element of breaking him down, but I like that you have him admire what makes Mohinder such a truly exceptional adversary.