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Gold - Merlin - Arthur/Merlin

Mar 16, 2009 19:56

Title: Gold
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Word Count: 1442
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Written for comment_fic but rapidly outgrew the character limit. Future fic.
Summary: On the battlefield, Merlin's power grows.

( Gold )

character:merlin, character:gaius, pairing:arthur/merlin, character:arthur pendragon, fandom:merlin, challenge:comment_fic

Comments 26

heartofoshun March 16 2009, 20:12:06 UTC

Beautifully conceived piece: Merlin's power increasing so dramatically through use (and with just a hint of anxiety as to what that could mean underlying the entire piece). Also loved the quality of the established relationship: the intimacy, familiarity and comfort they communicate through their banter. Loved the kiss that drives Gaith away! Thanks for sharing.

hils March 16 2009, 20:30:16 UTC

Oh, I love this! Wonderful!

crabby_lioness March 16 2009, 21:41:23 UTC

Very nice.

archaeologist_d March 16 2009, 21:56:10 UTC

Loved the description and the way Arthur is so worried for Merlin. I'd worry, too, if his eyes stay gold. Loved the banter, though. Well done.

mossylawn March 16 2009, 22:07:43 UTC

really good :)