Origin Stories [5/7] - Lost - Kate/Kevin/Sawyer

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Title: Origin Stories [5/7]
Pairing: Kate/Kevin/Sawyer (and combinations thereof)
Word Count: 2681
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Superhero!AU. Thank you to babylon_pride for betaing.
Previously: Part One :: Part Two :: Part Three :: Part Four
Summary: By day, Kevin Callis is an unnoticeable police officer, up-holding the law and too committed to his job to hold down a

Comments

[fosfomifira]

Yay! More Origin Stories!

Oh, Kevin. I want to give him a big hug. The poor guy is so lonely. It feels like he became a superhero almost by accident. He seems to be the only one who acknowledges the absurdity of the situation - the capes, the masks -, but he's not in any shape to make himself heard, not when Great White Hunter is running the show.

I feel for Juliet here, no power, no reputation, but at the same time proyecting strength. Makes you wonder what happened to her while she was kidnapped. Most importantly, it makes you wonder what Sawyer and Monica are really up to, why they've moved on from simple, almost petty crime to kidnaping superheroes and who knows what else.

Loved this :)

[gottalovev]

oh god, how can you make this get better and better! I love Kevin's doubts and uncertainties, that clash so much with the attitude of the core group that wants revenge. I love the little jibe at them looking like vigilantes, serious stuff under the humor :)

Juliet is vividly described, even with a couple of lines, and I love that we hear about even more superheroes (that of course we can place immediately!)

I love this story so much!