The Distance Between - Lost - Charlie/Desmond

[toestastegood]

Title: The Distance Between
Pairing: Charlie/Desmond
Word Count: 641
Rating: R
A/N: Written for the Porn Battle. In the Pick Me Back Up Again 'verse
Summary: They live too far apart for Desmond to be able to handle.

Comments

[gregoria44]

They're jittery in agitation, because it's[...] too bloody long since they'd last seen each other.

I love that I can hear either of them saying that sentence.

C/D is a great combination, and I love this; it's so... dripping and wet.

*insert own innuendo here*

[nakannalee]

*sniffle* Why can't this happen? Why???

Love your descriptions of the rain and wet clothes. This entire piece feels soaked right through. And the urgency... Perfect. Really enjoyed it!

[thespiansparkle]

*flails at you*

You knew I'd love it, I'm sure, but just in case...

LOVED it. I like it especially because it is such a little snippet that's full of the potential for many, many hot things to come...but also because it's sweet just to hear them MISS one another. Because I feel like both Des & Charlie would have to be in it for love, too. And that it isn't perfect--that it's kinda sweet and silly and a little awkward with the wet clothes, because in that way it IS perfect. If that makes sense.

*loves your porn* And you!

[janie_tangerine]

Happy Des & Charlie is a blessing, really. This was absolutely lovely and it seemed to, I don't know, radiate positive feeling? And it's good to see them like this. *screws canon*

[zelda_zee]

This is so sweet! I've actually never read this pairing, but I think I like it - it's Charlie, he kind of goes well with anyone, or so it seems.