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To Take Advantage - Lost - Charlie/Desmond

Feb 15, 2009 22:55

Title: To Take Advantage
Pairing: Charlie/Desmond
Word Count: 1475
Rating: NC-17
A/N: Written with lostpicksix's "blowjob" prompt. PWP.
Summary: Desmond's been staring at Charlie's mouth all day. Once they're alone together he finally gets some relief.

( To Take Advantage )

pairing:charlie/desmond, character:charlie pace, i'm a perv, prompt:lostpicksix - 2, character:desmond hume, fandom:lost

Comments 3

eff_reality February 16 2009, 03:22:35 UTC

Nghhhhhhhh. This is oh so hot. And the only way to write them, in my opinion: with Desmond totally at Charlie's mercy and unable to deal with it.

I can't say it, but I want it.
This was such a great moment.

And a gorgeously written Charlie. Well done!

zelda_zee February 16 2009, 08:38:35 UTC

Oh wow. This is so very, very hot. I love Desmond's desperate desire (alliteration!) - that is the hottest thing about this, how completely undone he is by how much he wants Charlie. That degree of need is always so hot, and you portray it with such immediacy. Love this!

jaydblu February 16 2009, 19:00:51 UTC

Um...died from the hot. Damn.
You wrote this so f*cking well, you could just feel Desmond's desperation for sweet satisfaction.
Just...mmmm. I imagine that I will be revisiting this one again soon. Wonderful.