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A Reasonable Quota of Sins - Lost - Charlie/Eddie

Jan 10, 2008 22:45

Title: A Reasonable Quota of Sins
Pairing: Charlie/Eddie
Word Count: 2471
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Written for the unconventional pairings lostfichallenge, and philosophy_20's 'Theory'. Set immediately post-3x03 flashbacks. Thank you to babylon_pride for betaing for me.
Warnings: Implied underage sex.
Summary: The six weeks on the commune left their mark on Eddie Colburn.

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character:charlie pace, challenge:lostfichallenge, pairing:charlie/eddie, prompt:philosophy_20, fandom:lost, character:eddie colburn

Comments 7

falafel_fiction January 11 2008, 00:30:36 UTC

Great Eddie characterisation! You really fleshed out his character and made his train of thought very engaging. I also loved your very subtle but touching asides on Charlie and Liam's relationship. Oh and the slashiness was very enjoyable considering Eddie's likeness to Billy Boyd. I had to try not to slip into naughty little Monaboyd fantasies!

"I reckon God's got bigger things to worry about than who I'm shagging, don't you?"

I loved that snappy oneliner. So very Charlie. Good luck in the challenge! I hope you'll enter it for my CharlieLives challenge too (it's perfect!). There's some lovely banners to be had.

elliotsmelliot January 11 2008, 03:52:58 UTC

You created such an interesting character with Eddie that this would work well even without both men's (boys'?) shared time as Locke's apprentice/son. Excellent work!

babydazzle January 11 2008, 06:29:26 UTC

janie_tangerine January 12 2008, 23:22:31 UTC

That was an unusual pairing indeed! I really liked how you built Eddie from that little we've seen of him (and anyway I liked him in FI, even if poor Locke probably didn't..) and the pairing just really worked! Great job on seventeen-year-old Charlie too, one could just picture him, and the hints at his relationship with Liam were perfect too. Great job on this!

aurorawest January 23 2008, 15:20:05 UTC

This was a really fantastic story. Your development of Eddie's character was great. And I love that you actually deal with the fact of underage sex (I think it gets lost too often in fandom) and how you portray Eddie's thoughts about what he's doing. His confusion about why, upon becoming a cop, he didn't become a good man was especially great. I think that's a feeling everyone can relate to.

Well done! :)