We Are The Calm Before The Storm - Lost - Bonnie/Greta

[toestastegood]

Title: We Are The Calm Before The Storm
Pairing: Bonnie/ Greta
Word Count: 400
Rating: PG
A/N: Written for lostfichallenge's "Water" round and writing_rainbow's "Pearl"
Summary: They had to find some way to pass the time.

Comments

[gemjam]

I really like this, the contrast between her wanting to escape and needing to stay; the things that make her want to leave and make her feel as though the things she holds dear would never be quite safe if she did. Nicely done :)

[falafel_musings]

Had to read this...my Lost femmeslash OTP!! *hugs them*

[aurorawest]

I love this pairing and I love what you did with it! Bonnie's insecurity and self-doubt is great, and I really the cognitive dissonance of her both disliking the Looking Glass and needing it to hold her relationship together. Nicely done!

[desmondalque]

I really like his, its a situation that most may not have realized or thought about, if only for a moment. The thoughts and feelings work well with the characters, and your writing style is very fluid, no filler, just what is happening and to the point.

[slybrunette]

Excellent! I love how she sees the Looking Glass as a place she really doesn't want to be in but something that is necessary to keep her relationship together. There's a lot of emotion and character development in this.