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Watch Him Slip Away - Hollyoaks - John Paul/Kieron

Aug 30, 2008 21:46

Title: Watch Him Slip Away
Pairing: John Paul/Kieron
Word Count: 400
Rating: NC-17
A/N: Written with 7_deadly_sins_'s "Lust" prompt.
Summary: He's trying desperately to hold onto what he knows he's already lost.

( Watch Him Slip Away )

character:kieron hobbs, prompt:7_deadly_sins_, i'm a perv, pairing:john paul/kieron, fandom:hollyoaks, character:john paul mcqueen

Comments 5

holysmokes21 August 30 2008, 21:16:52 UTC

This was really great. The writing was beautiful and it was so incredibly sad.
Thanks for sharing.

claire_kay August 30 2008, 22:10:13 UTC

this really fits in with the mood of JPK now and whats to come.
brilliantly written as always x

gigitrek August 31 2008, 19:37:15 UTC

The tone to this one is quite different from the others in the series; I like the fact you're reflecting the darker happenings on the show.

oximore March 7 2010, 22:44:34 UTC

This was so amazing!

*is still trying to get over the fact that you really wrote something about those two!*

Kieron despair & attachment toward John Paul is a thing of beauty! ^^

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oximore March 16 2010, 20:04:46 UTC

"and haven't actually watched a single episode since Kieron died!"

My principal interest in the show was John Paul storyline, so I stopped watching too! I really loved how Kieron & John Paul relationship went on (well despite the marriage thing that was a bit fast I think) and you really wrote them right! :)