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Want. Take. Have. - Heroes - Eden/Mohinder

May 23, 2008 17:13

Title: Want. Take. Have.
Pairing: Eden/Mohinder
Word Count: 892
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Mind control/dub-con
A/N: Written with 25_streetsigns 'Fresh oil' prompt. The title is a quote from episode 3.14 of Buffy the Vampire Slayer.
Summary: "You kiss him like you'll drown if you pull away. This is wrong - it's far past immoral - but it's just for tonight."

( Want. Take. Have )

character:eden mccain, i'm a perv, pairing:eden/mohinder, prompt:25_streetsigns, fandom:heroes, character:mohinder suresh

Comments 6

hanuueshe May 23 2008, 16:30:17 UTC

Oh wow *shiver*

shimmeree May 23 2008, 16:30:37 UTC

That was really hot. You should do a series of this. Mo/Eden semi-wrong PWP. It'd be awesome. XD

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obisgirl May 23 2008, 22:24:50 UTC

Wow! That was really hot. Poor Mohinder for being used like that.

perdiccas May 24 2008, 05:20:52 UTC

Oh wow, that was hot and dirty and so very wrong. I loved it, I loved that Eden justifies it to herself that she could see in his eyes that he wanted her, and that he would never make the first move so it's alright. It's really jarring to hear those kind of date-rapey justifications from a female character but I like how this fic has really made me think about gender roles (sorry prob not the tangent you intended), I mean if it was Matt doing this to a female character I'd be all ew!rape!misuse of power! but this seems... not that bad. But it should be, it's the same! ARGH my mind can't cope.

I like that she didn't touch Mo back, how it was all about what she wanted and she needed. I was kind of reeling when she orders Mo to never think of it again, it seems like such an underhanded thing to do, but also really reminiscent of her criminal past.

So in short: I loved it, really great snippet into Eden's mind.

poemwithnorhyme August 18 2008, 22:05:20 UTC

Oh, I just loved this! I'm not one for het fics, but I couldn't stay away. Eden is just too awesome. And the way you did this was just perfect. The justification of her own half 'rape', the way she's afraid she'll get caught even if no one would realize that Mohinder wasn't doing that because he loved her or wanted to. Just wonderful!

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poemwithnorhyme August 19 2008, 22:53:51 UTC

I'm not done yet! I'm really busy though, so it'll be a little while..but expect more comments. No need to reply to them all individually, no problem, ^_^