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Bathing and Bed-Sharing - Bedlam - Jed/Ryan

Feb 12, 2011 17:15

Title: Bathing
Pairing: Jed/Ryan
Word Count: 205
Rating: NC-17
A/N: Written at my Tumblr. I don't usually cross-post Tumblr fic here until the end of the month, but Bedlam deserves more fic.
Summary: After their experience with the ghost, Jed and Ryan start bathing together.

( Bathing )

pairing:jed/ryan, fandom:bedlam, character:jed harper, character:ryan mcallister

Comments 7

immaculate February 12 2011, 17:50:02 UTC

Lovely!
I loved the chemistry between Ryan and Jed in the first episode. I came out of it shipping them, but I have a habit of that so it's nice to read this and feel like I'm not alone.

I really like your choice of words and the way your sentences flow.
I can't wait to read more from you!

entangled_now February 12 2011, 19:48:07 UTC

I like these a lot, I'm hoping we get some more chemistry between them as the series goes on.

lunik_the_bard February 12 2011, 20:05:10 UTC

I love these, they're both so intimite, like their chemistry in the show. I loved your turn of phrase in the first one, too, "chasing their way" to climax, that was nice.

ashes4twenty February 16 2011, 15:31:37 UTC

I enjoyed both of these very much! I like how Ryan and Jed's friendship is developing on the show, but I'm a slash girl at heart so I was more than happy to read something like this :)

Great work!

miya_morana February 20 2011, 17:49:48 UTC

This is beautiful and hot and lovely! Bedlam deserves more love. :)

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miya_morana February 20 2011, 19:50:54 UTC

It's a sweet ficlet, hope you like it! ^^ entangled_now was the one to tell me you'd written Bedlam fics, btw, which made me realize that for some strange reason I wasn't already following your stuff.