If Life's a Journey, Let's Walk It Together - White Collar - El/Neal/Peter

[toestastegood]

Title: If Life's a Journey, Let's Walk It Together
Pairing: El/Peter (pre-El/Neal/Peter)
Word Count: 7500
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Dirty talk
A/N: Written for a prompt from citrus_taste.
Summary: A shared fantasy of Neal had become common currency in their bedroom; when Neal came to work with Peter, it was almost impossible to sustain.

Comments

[sexycazzy]

Just brilliant! :-)

[bustedflush]

This is so wonderful -- so well-written, and so sexy. I particularly appreciate how you mix the hot fantasies with the constant reminders that these are "real" people -- El's tendency to have people moaning, Peter's constant going blank when he tries to join her in creating the scenarios, etc. Thank you!

[b_scholes]

Oh this is beautiful. The slow build up of Neal in their bedroom fantasies to becoming a solid presence in their lives and what to do. Peter hiding at work only to find that his wife has taken a more direct route.

[misura]

Loved El's cheerfully dirty, brilliant mind, and seeing how Peter deals with their fantasies over time, how most of the time, he remains so very aware of who and what he is, and where the lines are that he won't allow himself to cross.

An all-around fabulous read.

[zelda_zee]

OMG! This is fantastic! I don't know how you managed to do it, but I think you hit on almost all the things I like to see in a fic with these characters.

Your characterizations are just wonderful.

I appreciate that you addressed the power imbalance - I always feel that something is missing if writers don't at least mention it.

I love the ending, and then the bookends just make it complete. Excellent work, hon!