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Hiding Spot - Merlin - Arthur/Merlin

Dec 22, 2009 20:31

Title: Hiding Spot
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Word Count: 4892
Rating: PG
A/N: Written with a 10_per_genre prompt. Not true to canon in terms of the friendships between the OT4.
Summary: Merlin receives several visitors while he is hiding beneath Camelot, and Arthur's strange behaviour causes him to worry that his secret may have been discovered.

( Hiding Spot )

character:merlin, character:gaius, pairing:arthur/merlin, character:arthur pendragon, fandom:merlin, character:gwen, character:morgana, prompt:10_per_genre

Comments 12

unembraced December 22 2009, 20:57:33 UTC

great fic, i really enjoyed it :)

frames_in_aria December 23 2009, 01:11:53 UTC

Arthur is a prince and Merlin is a sorcerer and Morgana is a witch and there is a crazy magic-eating monster out there trying to chomp on his essence, and yet all that anyone in Camelot can focus on is their love lives. It is a miracle that the human race has survived so long. lol lol lol

Anyway, it's a nice, cute fic ♥ Poor Arthur is being teased though XDDDD

katzgalore December 23 2009, 02:22:41 UTC

This was really lovely. I actually felt sad reading about how awesome Morgana is in light of what's happened to her in canon, but she's still here and kicking ass in fanfic so yay! Loved the thought that one day Gwen will be happy to bully Arthur directly, hee. Pouty Arthur and later earnestly giving permission to be kissed is very adorable but I'm happy Merlin refrained and we get a glimpse of progression in him wanting Arthur to fully know who he is. That's what most fans want in terms of the show, ok, we're not gonna get the kissing onscreen but Arthur seeing more of the true Merlin, which I guess is tangled up in his secret and thus requires the reveal, would be great XD ( ... )

red_cortina December 23 2009, 08:57:44 UTC

Lovely fic! I like the way you didn't actually have Arthur find out and didn't actually have anything happen between them - just moved them a bit closer.

accordingtomel December 23 2009, 09:23:22 UTC

Eeeee! That was so adorable and sweet and fun and I totally loved it!! Especially awkward Arthur...hahaha! Love :D. Are you going to write a sequel, 'cause I'd totally love to read that! This was great. It's literally the freaking middle of the night but I couldn't sleep, so I thought I'd come online and read fanfic. My mind feels more at ease now, so thank you for that! Cheers ♥