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Mission - Lost - Gen (Charlie)

Oct 18, 2009 13:01

Title: Mission
Character: Charlie
Word Count: 108
Rating: PG
A/N: Written for lost_in_108. I'm indulging in my favourite AU scenario again, wherein the Others actually did have a plan when they kidnapped Charlie.
Summary: After being kidnapped by the Others, Charlie heads back to the beach.

( Mission )

character:charlie pace, challenge:lost_in_108, fandom:lost

Comments 5

primarycolors92 October 18 2009, 21:45:01 UTC

Ooooh. Creepy. I like it.

valhalla37 October 19 2009, 00:15:24 UTC

Oooooh, deliciously creepy and so visual. Great job sketching out the scene and creating a great sense of atmosphere!

missy_useless October 19 2009, 16:59:44 UTC

I absolutely love this - it's so creepy, so atmospheric. What a great AU!

ozmissage October 19 2009, 21:57:21 UTC

This is so eerie, I love it! The "Jacob knows" bit gave me goosebumps. Wonderful job!

jeaniris October 20 2009, 22:16:47 UTC

I remember when I first saw that scene, I was hoping that it was the island bringing Charlie back and not just Jack's heroics. I love this.